Thanks so much for the sounding board mate!
You are right on both counts the sketch style is a bit advanced, I'm not sure I'll try and incorporate your idea about the showing of development toward the render cycle. I want the full renders to be as really as photos so aka devoid to much vegetation (the realism dropper in most cases). So I guess not eluding to there 3d origin. Most wont know they are rendered.
The sketch I need to show enough to demonstrate the material allocations and tie to the renders. Should mention the sketches will all be of varied home styles, each matching the 3 full close up full renders. I was thinking earlier toward a napkin laid on the page "designers back of napkin sketch, even introducing the facade style name by a monogram on the napkin as if conceived in travels or dicussion at a high end resort or restaurant - this would fit the scheme and add some funk and maybe building some associations! As even the tagline is based on the client's expansion from a resort area to a more urban market.
Yeah like you suggest I need to get more from the sketch, I guess what's being tried with the renders - build intrigue!
The floor tiles are lower weight (0.25) than the furniture (0.5) but the furniture could still do with a beef up. Want to be careful the heavier they are the smaller the room feels. Though need to test more first as high quality printing holds the line weights much better.
Looking at about 30,000 print run over the suite so needing to get ALL sweet!
So thanks again mate! I like being told what for - makes me work harder!