Hi,

Nice model, and the render is nice too. The tree at the far end looks out of place? Other than that it looks good to my untrained eye 😉

I think it might work better if the side of the house is rendered a slightly different shade to the front. Also maybe if you limit the canvas effect and add a gaussian blur on an adjustment layer it will look more natural.

edit, I have had a play, but this doesn't really achieve it, I think you need to start with the original exported image.

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hi pugz, i think its fine, but lightning its a little flat. you have also some noise on the walls and like you said the floor needs more work, overall nice job.

I am in agreement with Dan. The exterior is very nice and IMO the plant/pot size is a good balance for the wall on the left. I look forward to seeing the "less noisy" render.

Start with the Warehouse:
http://sketchup.google.com/3dwarehouse/details?mid=a064872dcb1dc05f194f34774bdb7e18&prevstart=0
http://sketchup.google.com/3dwarehouse/details?mid=fcebdc2db3f9b4c01ca36424313a787e&prevstart=0
http://sketchup.google.com/3dwarehouse/details?mid=e316f8c4460d21e61d225d751745cd28&prevstart=12
http://sketchup.google.com/3dwarehouse/details?mid=dd219f47f06b84eb43b9eef399a0841d&prevstart=12
http://sketchup.google.com/3dwarehouse/details?mid=43d00f1f63d726b043b9eef399a0841d&prevstart=12
http://sketchup.google.com/3dwarehouse/details?mid=b18434a7db8a5f7843b9eef399a0841d&prevstart=12

Thanx,

found a few good ones already.

wow...beautiful concept...i like it...look so peacefully...

%(#800000)[Great Render, the only thing i change on "nieuwhuis1wipat8.png" is the grass, it looks to tile, like a carpet sample.
Anyway is a cool render.]

Youd probably have better luck over at the fryrender forum: http://www.randomcontrol.com/forums/fryrender/phpbb2/

You could try this.

The diffuse image was taken from this site :
http://www.kavewall.com/fire-smoke/index.htm

I just cropped the image and made a clip map out of it.

Hope this helps.

Material file.

flame.jpg

i think you need more definition of the shadows... work with that! 👍

I like the Bedroom images. Very good rendering. Is that room on a earthquake fault? Continue a jagged line of marble across the floor?

I wonder what the feel of the conference room ceiling will be with people in it?

We had a glass table like that in our conference room. Very cool but I hated it. And a tile floor too. The room could be acoustically challenged and cold. Trying to shorten meeting times? The table causes glare and you get to see everyone's laps (no chance to scratch). The chairs look comfy though!

Thanxs everybody,

Very nice of you to help look. Even nicer to tweak the model for me. I'm at work now, but I cant wait to get home to check the model.

Greetz from the Netherlands

The only crit I have with your render is the obvious tiling of the stone texture on the back wall. Apart from that, I think your image is superb, congrats! 👍

A few available on cadyou, perhaps not as detailed as solo's.. sitting room furniture is something i will definitely be adding more of over the next month:

http://www.cadyou.com/searches/downloads/type:model/term:sofa

Clean render. Nice.

Maybe you could bump-map the small joystick? I think it is a bit too smooth.

hi Coen,

Thanxs for the feedback. But I didn't add noise filter. pic is straight out of Kerky. It's so noise because it only has 17 passes. I can try to fix it in Photoshop or Picasa.

You can try this.

Not too complicated, but I managed to get the below pictures out of it with Indigo.Night scene
Day scene

😉

Lovely ring, what Material did you use for the Gem?