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    • pugz1983P Offline
      pugz1983
      last edited by

      Hi Everybody,

      Model is made by my partner. Render done by me. Still working on the textures. Love some feedback on this one.Next in this series is a smoking room. Hope to post it soon.

      Greetz from Holland

      http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/3927/wachtkamertf3.jpg

      By jet3ddesign at 2009-02-17

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        FioranoJC
        last edited by

        Ziet er erg goed uit jongen.

        I think that it looks very good kid. I don't know how but, try to make the next render a little bit less pixelly if you know what I mean?

        ( beetje te korrelig )

        Groetjes

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        • pugz1983P Offline
          pugz1983
          last edited by

          Bedankt! πŸ˜„

          Thanx for the feedback. I stopped the render at about 10 hours. Done in Kerkythea. got a new one running now on my other pc. Going to let it run a few hours more.

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            krowka_smieszka
            last edited by

            @pugz1983 said:

            I stopped the render at about 10 hours. Done in Kerkythea. got a new one running now on my other pc. Going to let it run a few hours more.

            what? 10 hours! πŸ‘Š πŸ˜• On my Pc after 3h image is silky and smooth

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            • Bryan KB Offline
              Bryan K
              last edited by

              Nice. I like the transcendent 20th century mod look.

              See my portfolio at https://delphiscousin.blogspot.com/

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                wolfy
                last edited by

                Pugz, I think your floor, walls and tryptich look very nice. The vase and plant are overwhelming the space a bit and your exterior needs a much more realistic look. 10 hours is a long time, but keep up the good work.

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                • pugz1983P Offline
                  pugz1983
                  last edited by

                  Thanx for the feedback everyone,

                  10 hours long? I rendered with MLT BPT. But I have to admit I'm rendering on a heavily overclocked pentium 4 HT, so i agree it's time for a new pc. I agree with you on the plant, But it's very hard to find some decent 3D plant models. Dont want to use face me components. Maybe its better to ad them with post processing? Any tips on how to improve exterior scene?

                  Greetz from holland

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                    wolfy
                    last edited by

                    Your plant choice looks good, it just needs to be scaled down a bit.

                    As for the exterior, it looks over exposed so maybe turn down the environmental light or multiplier.
                    If the interior becomes a little darker, a small light behind the camera always helps.

                    Now say hello to some freshly brewed Heinecken for me!

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                      dpimpc
                      last edited by

                      @wolfy said:

                      Your plant choice looks good, it just needs to be scaled down a bit.

                      As for the exterior, it looks over exposed so maybe turn down the environmental light or multiplier.
                      If the interior becomes a little darker, a small light behind the camera always helps.

                      Now say hello to some freshly brewed Heinecken for me!

                      I disagree, with all due respect of course, I love the look of the exterior! The yellow tint that's so sun washed gives the image an artsy quality that really fits the space IMO! I really wouldn't change anything other than it's a little noisy, but I wouldn't eliminate all the noise...it gives it a sort of depth.

                      'Architecture is the art of how to waste space...'

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                      • boofredlayB Offline
                        boofredlay
                        last edited by

                        I am in agreement with Dan. The exterior is very nice and IMO the plant/pot size is a good balance for the wall on the left. I look forward to seeing the "less noisy" render.

                        http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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