Fantastic work. Tough to find anything to improve on.
Scott
I never saw any point where the camera swung a full 360. Actually nothing more than 180 at most.
I agree with what many have said and Pete (Solo) is right, you have 30 seconds MAX to sell this or any project with an animation. Anything over 2 minutes is like making a customer watch a full legth feature. The vast majority of customers will want to see great pictures and a shorter video. I typically print some really nice shots to leave behind as well.
Scott
Well done!!!! My only crit would be that the first 4 images give the feeling either that office space is on the billionth floor or it is a flying office with nothing out the windows to ground the image.
Nice work!!
Scott
Jason,
Not bad work. There are a few things that can be worked on:
The pool edge material needs to be fixed
The pool looks like it has trees IN it, I know it is a refvelction but it drew my eye right to it
The guy walking adds nothing to the animation.
Scott
A few comments:
When showing renders it is always nice to know what render engine you are using. That way when people are offering comments and crits they can reference the abilities of the rendering software being used.
That being said....the texturing needs some work. There is some really bad repeating in the wood textures.
Showing furniture or anything else on a black background make the image lose all depth.
I think those are plants shown on top of the shelves. If they are I would get rid of them or get better ones. Those (in their poor quality) add nothing to the image.
The pink walls are really distracting
Scott
This is great work. I have to argue the "poser" comment. I think the people placed in these images look quite natural. The second image shows people sitting and talking. The are well placed. The colors are a bit saturated but not too bad. Nice renders.
Scott
I think the image needs a good bit of work to be honest. There needs to be much more attention to the materials and details of the vehicle. I have attached an image or a real veyron from behind. Granted some of it is the lack of detail in the modeling but there is also alot of detail that can be done in that materials.
As for the lighting....its a studio. Did you add any lights? did you build a lighting rig? I dont mean to be harsh but there really was not much done here.
Scott
Beautiful modeling and rendering.
Scott
Any chance you will be sharing this model?
I would love to see some more teasers/tutorials of how this great looking plug in will work.
Scott
Boy you sure like to talk about how connected you are and speak about how you will tell everyone and their brother about your bad experience and how they should not use Adam's software. Sounds more like slander to me as most of Adam's customers seem pretty pleased with the software. Was your hope to threaten Adam with all your connections and possible lost clients if you spoke bad about a product in the hopes he would say "please no, don't tell all the millions of people who worship your opinion.....Here take this upgrade at no cost". I love how in your mind everyother software company is OK for their practices although Adam is SO wrong for the same style upgrade charges. Why didn't you ask Adam BEFORE you purchased, "Is there a major upgrade in the future and if I buy now what will the policy be for the upcoming upgrade?". Sure seems like that would have saved your heart and mouth from running out of control....JUST SAYIN!
Scott
Went to their website to possibly download a demo and could not find any. There was an odd PDF about a licensing dispute?
I agree about the repeating texture on the floor. Also the foregrouind arch needs more segments as you can see the facets. The walls seem a bit too clean. Overall I like the image.
I personally am a fan of native SU output (when done right like this). Like it has been said, nicely detailed but not over done. My only comment would be that the smart car (being as small as it is) makes the structure look even more narrow and tall. Overall I like the images.
Scott
The lack of a face in the first image is a bit creepy.
Scott