I'd increase the segments on the curve of the pendant lights so they appear smoother. Also, the hands on teh clock appear painted on - no shadows as in the original.
Very realistic and believable.
I see three areas that you may wish to tweak. The hanging towels seem a little too crispy for the overall lighting. Perhaps the sconce parabolic light pattern needs to soften or diffuse where it strikes the wall? And the rug edge may need some "fur" overlap to soften it as well. But, because everything else in the room has such clean lines, I am almost hesitant to say these things.
By the way, what would the water closet look like in this fixture set?
Nice model, very fine details - this will not be hard to render (if you mean some PR rendering) as the first, most important step is always a good model. 👍
I'm a student of architecture,
I need to draw a model of peter eisenman's house VI in archicad,
can you please send me this model so I can measure the heights and the distances
thank you very much!
I prefer the first view as a composition, with good texturing, interesting sun/shadow angles and a good sky this could be a great scene.
One crit is the reversed faces, but that can be fixed easily.
Ok I would slightly turn the sun to go deeper in space and also change the view angle ....you can also put some extra lights ...one way lem behind camera , the other way couple of floating omnis. You can also light it up further in Photoshop by using adjustment layer with screen blend.