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GdBTM

hi guys...it's another internal render made by me, how can I improve it?

brodie

Looks like you've got a good start there. Which program are you using to render? Here are the things that I see...

It's quite dark, could use some more light, especially with the bright outdoors. The shadow on the ground goes from very bright to very dark. Seems a bit odd to me, as if the light weren't bouncing around the room.
The perspective on the exterior photo seems off. Looks to me like the horizon line should be quite a bit lower.
I like the light coming from the stair well but it seems very intense and I'm not sure what sort of light would look quite like that (it looks like someone has a work lamp up there like you'd see in a garage pointed at the wall rather than a sconce of some kind.

I think once you take care of that sort of stuff you'll be in good shape. It looks like the best parts of the image are the ones that don't really stand out. The interior seems quite good and I love the curtains and how they fit into that reveal in the ceiling. The floor material might not be perfect either but it's hard to tell with the lighting.

-Brodie

teofas

Hi GdB! i think brodie its right,,, one of most important this its the light,,and would be good if we can know what software your using to render, maybe that way we can help more,,,see ya.

GdBTM

I use podium, tnx a lot!

sepo

Ok I would slightly turn the sun to go deeper in space and also change the view angle ....you can also put some extra lights ...one way lem behind camera , the other way couple of floating omnis. You can also light it up further in Photoshop by using adjustment layer with screen blend.