Urban mixed use project

Mike Lucey · 23 May 2008, 22:15

Hi pbozarth and welcome. You have the DT mastered quite well.
I like the treatment your have adopted here. My only suggestion
is that you might consider using a solid margin on the left
also (but fade the sky) and have that rectangle shoot beyond
the margin as you have done on the right margin.

Mike

pbozarth · 26 May 2008, 06:55

Here is one of the main interior spaces:
I feel like it looks better at a higher res, where the individual lines are more visible and the colors are less dominant

remus · 26 May 2008, 07:41

Thats really good, i reckon youve hit the nail on the head with that.

pbozarth · 26 May 2008, 10:11

A revised version of my original exterior perspective

pbozarth · 26 May 2008, 10:17

This version has some of the lines turned off, which gives it an interesting sort of watercolor effect

bytor · 26 May 2008, 15:45

pbozarth,

I like the version with lines more. The people in the foreground help - but loose the guy with the dog dootie bag and his companion - bad perspective makes them distracting to the image.

Bytor

Frederik · 26 May 2008, 16:37

These are really NICE, pbozarth..!!
Can't decide which one I like best - they all look great...!

PKast · 26 May 2008, 18:06

These are really fine. You have really got a grasp of the "Dennis Technique". Ditto about losing the dog ass in the foreground.

Best,

pbozarth · 6 Jun 2008, 06:13

My first try at a night shot...

pbozarth · 6 Jun 2008, 06:19

slightly different, I toned down the interior people and the signs in the foreground.

pbozarth · 16 Jun 2008, 01:10

I took an interior perspective from this project, and layered some sketchup views over the same view quickly rendered in kerkythea to impart some quality of the true lighting in the room. It is certainly not a photoreal effect, but its definitely a different look than the other dennis technique stuff I have been doing...

pbozarth · 16 Jun 2008, 01:11

ps what do you think of the floor, I applied a gray fill layer to the floor and film grained it in photoshop. I was going for a carpeted look. What do you think of the texture, and the level of shadow that is visible?

plot-paris · 16 Jun 2008, 07:36

I definitely like the combination of render and SketchUp - gives a handdrawn style (except for some pixeled lines at the right wall) while providing realistic lighting.

the uneven floor texture is convincingly like a carpet. to me it seems a bit glossy though.

jcaintn · 18 Jun 2008, 02:28

Loved them all up to the last one with the fireworks...

Keep up the good work.