The Youngest Architect in Sketchucation

honoluludesktop

When a senior in Architectural school, our final project was graded by the "Grand Old Man of Hawaiian Architecture". It was a closed jury, we waited with baited breath, only to learn that he put us down without mercy. I was pissed at his arrogance, and dismissed what he said. I am now probably as old as he was at that time, and completely relate to his review, Sigh. The rocky road will never be paved.

InterArchi

More to come ..later on

Bryan K

Those look really good.

jim smith

Great looking renderings and congratulations on your graduation and welcome to the profession.

InterArchi

@honoluludesktop said:

Are you licensed? My college professor told us that when you get licensed, don't forget that you have met the minimum requirements for being a Architect. OH Well!!! It never ends. In my experience, the least you know, the more you are capable of achieving.

Thank you sir for the feedback, but would you please be more clear ? I still can't get what do you exactly mean

InterArchi

@tig said:

Well done I'm glad that we were able to help you with your rendering tool issues...

THANK YOU MISTER TIG ...NOW U HAVE TO FIND ME A JOB
AT LEAST MODELING AND RENDERING BY INTERNET .. lol

InterArchi

@unknownuser said:

Great looking renderings and congratulations on your graduation and welcome to the profession.

Thanks Sir, I appreciate it

marked001

@interarchi said:

Thank you sir for the feedback, but would you please be more clear ? I still can't get what do you exactly mean

the primary thing he's asking is if you are a 'licensed' architect... in most countries, simply completing architecture school does not make you an architect. you must work for a number of years and then take multiple exams to get your license and officially be an architect.

Daniel

@interarchi said:

@honoluludesktop said:

Are you licensed? My college professor told us that when you get licensed, don't forget that you have met the minimum requirements for being a Architect. OH Well!!! It never ends. In my experience, the least you know, the more you are capable of achieving.

Thank you sir for the feedback, but would you please be more clear ? I still can't get what do you exactly mean

In some countries, upon graduating from architecture school, there is then a minimum period of internship and an examination required before becoming a licensed architect. In the U.S., the title of architect is reserved only for those who have become licensed. Is that the case in Algeria?

Nice looking renderings. My only crit is that they look devoid of life - no people

InterArchi

YES YES, NOW I SEE WHAT HE MEANS ..
WELL I'm not a " licenced architect " I have been freshly graduated from my architecture school,

Yes, here in Algeria, it's the same, we've got to work as '' an architect '' in an office , in architectural firm for 18 months to get that licence, to be able to work as an architect in the professional field, I mean for your own,

Thanks for feedback

InterArchi

I want more critics guys come oooooooonn

Ben Ritter

OK. Why is the woodgrain on a diagonal in the computer room image? Why are trees missing in your night shot? Is that enough of a critque?

Very nice renderings and model, and, congratulations.

InterArchi

@ben ritter said:

OK. Why is the woodgrain on a diagonal in the computer room image? Why are trees missing in your night shot? Is that enough of a critque?

Very nice renderings and model, and, congratulations.

I dont like the post-render stuffs, it was very hard to render the trees

Thanks sir

Cyberdactyl

Yes, very much look into certification or licensing. Whatever is required in your country, so you don't go through the turmoils of THIS FELLOW.

Also consider sitting through this short series.

brokenstaral

I don't mean to be rude, but the title 'architect' is protected, only a licensed architect can call himself/herself 'architect'.

If you have a license, congrates!!

If you don't...you can only call youself architectural designer.

stevebo

I think these images have a great deal of potential but currently just look a bit "flat". Unrefined maybe is a better word, but they don't really have a good "punch" to the image. Like it has been said before, it needs some life. Maybe people and maybe turn on the computer screens! Have an image on the monitors.

I hope you don't mind, but I did a quick Photoshop job of one of the images. Very quick but just gives an idea of what I mean. Adding some life and depth into the image.

Daniel

I recall the advise/criticism of a professor once....your client does not want to shell out lots of money to build a building, only to see it sitting there empty (especially retail), so you shouldn't present it that way. Put some life into your images.

solo

@stevebo said:

I think these images have a great deal of potential but currently just look a bit "flat". Unrefined maybe is a better word, but they don't really have a good "punch" to the image. Like it has been said before, it needs some life. Maybe people and maybe turn on the computer screens! Have an image on the monitors.

I hope you don't mind, but I did a quick Photoshop job of one of the images. Very quick but just gives an idea of what I mean. Adding some life and depth into the image.

Attention to details mate...

All good presentations need to be scrutinised by a trained eye before releasing to the untrained eye.

texture UV's
Material wrong
Black material or shadow? looks wrong
Light hotspot/burn
Diffuse mat? or forgotten material?
Too shiny, no bump or spec.

Gwyatt

Love the renders, what render pack did you use in the end?

Hieru

@brokenstaral said:

If you don't...you can only call youself architectural designer.

Not necessarily a dirty word in my experience