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      InterArchi
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      I want more critics guys come oooooooonn

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        Ben Ritter
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        OK. Why is the woodgrain on a diagonal in the computer room image? Why are trees missing in your night shot? Is that enough of a critque? πŸ˜‰

        Very nice renderings and model, and, congratulations.

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          InterArchi
          last edited by

          @ben ritter said:

          OK. Why is the woodgrain on a diagonal in the computer room image? Why are trees missing in your night shot? Is that enough of a critque? πŸ˜‰

          Very nice renderings and model, and, congratulations.

          I dont like the post-render stuffs, it was very hard to render the trees πŸ‘Š

          Thanks sir

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            Cyberdactyl
            last edited by

            Yes, very much look into certification or licensing. Whatever is required in your country, so you don't go through the turmoils of THIS FELLOW.

            Also consider sitting through this short series.

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              brokenstaral
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              I don't mean to be rude, but the title 'architect' is protected, only a licensed architect can call himself/herself 'architect'.

              If you have a license, congrates!!

              If you don't...you can only call youself architectural designer.

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                stevebo
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                I think these images have a great deal of potential but currently just look a bit "flat". Unrefined maybe is a better word, but they don't really have a good "punch" to the image. Like it has been said before, it needs some life. Maybe people and maybe turn on the computer screens! Have an image on the monitors.

                I hope you don't mind, but I did a quick Photoshop job of one of the images. Very quick but just gives an idea of what I mean. Adding some life and depth into the image.

                return.jpg

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                  Daniel
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                  I recall the advise/criticism of a professor once....your client does not want to shell out lots of money to build a building, only to see it sitting there empty (especially retail), so you shouldn't present it that way. Put some life into your images.

                  My avatar is an anachronism.

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                    solo
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                    @stevebo said:

                    I think these images have a great deal of potential but currently just look a bit "flat". Unrefined maybe is a better word, but they don't really have a good "punch" to the image. Like it has been said before, it needs some life. Maybe people and maybe turn on the computer screens! Have an image on the monitors.

                    I hope you don't mind, but I did a quick Photoshop job of one of the images. Very quick but just gives an idea of what I mean. Adding some life and depth into the image.

                    return.jpg

                    Attention to details mate...

                    All good presentations need to be scrutinised by a trained eye before releasing to the untrained eye.

                    return.jpg

                    1. texture UV's
                    2. Material wrong
                    3. Black material or shadow? looks wrong
                    4. Light hotspot/burn
                    5. Diffuse mat? or forgotten material?
                    6. Too shiny, no bump or spec.

                    http://www.solos-art.com

                    If you see a toilet in your dreams do not use it.

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                      Gwyatt
                      last edited by

                      Love the renders, what render pack did you use in the end?

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                        Hieru
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                        @brokenstaral said:

                        If you don't...you can only call youself architectural designer.

                        Not necessarily a dirty word in my experience πŸ˜‰

                        www.davidhier.co.uk

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