Temperature, exposure and bump in Twilight.

[Rich O Brien]

Looking good. Shouldn't the lamp stand have some type of caustics? Unless its plastic.

I'd dial the bump on the duvet down a bit and add some fresnel to up the fabric-y feel

[Bryan K]

Nice warm lighting.

[tuna1957]

Hard to comment much on such a “tight “ view. I think I’d rotate the carpet 90 degrees. Curious about the wood texture you used. Also how the lights in the lamps are set up….

[Mike Amos]

Somehow I lost the entire model, something that happens sometimes. Rebuilt, still a way to go Might be better in WIP I suppose.

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[tuna1957]

Looking good so far

[Mike Amos]

Thanks mate, I almost know what I didn't do before I did it and then did something else.

I know, it's late.

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[L i am]

Hi Mike, I strongly suggest that you work from a reference image and try to recreate the lighting etc, or at least a mood board.
It is fairly unusual for the same person to do the interior design, interior architecture lighting design, furnishings and accessories and 3D modeller and render artist.
A good exercise is to recreate an existing image of, for instance, a kitchen or bedroom etc It is not cheating it is learning to be infuenced by an existing image that appeals to you.

[Mike Amos]

Ta mate.

[Bryan K]

Nice! Put some pictures on the wall and call it done!

[L i am]

@bryan k said:

Nice! Put some pictures on the wall and call it done!

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[Bryan K]

@l i am said:

@bryan k said:

Nice! Put some pictures on the wall and call it done!

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The render looks really good. Just needs some pictures or art on the wall.

[Mike Amos]

Thanks folks, a bit more than pictures. Some texture and finish changes but I think I am done.

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[pbacot]

Nice!!! Somehow the pictures help with the scale.

[Mike Amos]

Ta mate, I like the warmth of the first image. I still have a lot to get to grips with setting a decent scene.

[Mike Amos]

Counterpoints.

Different wall colours as a counterpoint.

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[Bryan K]

That is a perfectly normal bedroom right there that could be anywhere in the world in an average person's house and it looks like a photo.

Well done!

[Mike Amos]

Thanks mate.

[Mike Amos]

Blue/Grey.

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[Bryan K]

An excellent alternative!

Both look great.

[Mike Amos]

Thanks, I could have let it cook longer I suppose.