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  • J Offline
    jova_the_king
    last edited by 28 Feb 2017, 13:51

    Hello good people,

    This is my first post on this forum, although I visit it regularly.

    Browsing this forum I learned a lot of useful things related to SketchUp, there are many experts here!

    So, I would ask you to evaluate my work and give advice on how to improve my renders.

    I did renders of a kitchen, modeled in SketchUp and rendered with Vray. There are no accessories, so it looks empty, but the important thing here is lighting and materials.
    And yes, the design of the kitchen is not my idea, it was done strictly by the idea of the client.

    Thanks


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      Rich O Brien Moderator
      last edited by 28 Feb 2017, 14:08

      That frosted glass looks great and the render is nice too.

      Only thing I could critique is the camera position...

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      The 2pt perspective and the camera direction makes you look at the corner.

      This is a great video about composition....

      Download the free D'oh Book for SketchUp πŸ“–

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        jova_the_king
        last edited by 28 Feb 2017, 21:30

        Thanks for the review, your critique is very useful, I can learn a lot from this video.

        Jovan K.

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          Bryan K
          last edited by 1 Mar 2017, 05:50

          Overall a good first render. Better than my first attempts!

          Excellent video Rich! I need to use those techniques as well.

          See my portfolio at https://delphiscousin.blogspot.com/

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            Daniel
            last edited by 1 Mar 2017, 20:20

            There seems to be an unwritten rule that everyone does at least one kitchen.

            I think your rendering looks great, my one critique would be that it needs some life; add some stuff to the counters, make it look like someone lives there. Also, it looks like the upper cabinets on the back wall will hit the ceiling lights when they are opened (particularly the one over the cook top).

            My avatar is an anachronism.

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              jova_the_king
              last edited by 12 Mar 2017, 22:49

              I have finally found some time to work on this project, and this is the result. Thank you all for useful suggestion. Hope you like the new one... πŸ˜„


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                Bryan K
                last edited by 13 Mar 2017, 17:47

                Wow! That looks great!

                See my portfolio at https://delphiscousin.blogspot.com/

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                  Daniel
                  last edited by 14 Mar 2017, 18:36

                  Looks great, Jova the King. Those granny smith apples look good enough to throw at my nephew!

                  My avatar is an anachronism.

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                    HornOxx
                    last edited by 14 Mar 2017, 18:57

                    @bryan k said:

                    Overall a good first render. Better than my first attempts!...

                    πŸ˜„ πŸ˜„ and twice much better than mine Bryan πŸ˜„ πŸ˜„

                    @jova_the_king said:

                    ...Hope you like the new one... πŸ˜„...

                    Yes! and welcome and good job πŸ‘ - go on and keep posting!

                    never trust a skinny cook

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                      pbacot
                      last edited by 14 Mar 2017, 20:51

                      Very nice job. Light looks great!

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