Twilight Render Glass Conservatory + External

sepo · 25 Feb 2010, 18:59

Nice composition but it is bit green for my taste.

olishea · 25 Feb 2010, 19:09

still?!! you shoulda seen the raw render it was VERY green!

i just cant get color balance right! Although I still wanted the glass to cast some green into the room....i like it like that!

please PP it if you fancy I wont be offended!

solo · 25 Feb 2010, 19:13

Oli, looks good, I may tone down the bump a little on the furniture.

As far as the IBL/hdri goes, can you adjust the intensity? if yes then about 25% less would give a great result.

olishea · 25 Feb 2010, 20:56

thanks pete.

I'll give it a go when I render some more tomorrow.

I updated original post with a warmer version, is it better?

olishea · 26 Feb 2010, 17:22

here is a tester, gonna leave it rendering over weekend.

geometry:

geometry+ render =

THNAKS TO SOLO FOR THE PLANTS, THEY LOOK GREAT! AND VERY SKETCHUP FRIENDLY!

nomeradona · 1 Mar 2010, 14:06

wow! excellent space and very nice render oli.

D-space · 1 Mar 2010, 16:17

Awesome render, looks pretty cleaned!
Btw...does it shows caustics?

michaliszissiou · 1 Mar 2010, 17:23

These are great renders oli.
A so peaceful feeling, that really good. Not greenish (well just a bit). Some, just a little, magenta on highlights maybe.....

olishea · 2 Mar 2010, 09:53

thank you very much for all your kind words, your critical eyes keep me trying harder with each new project!!

sepo · 2 Mar 2010, 18:18

The last one looks very convincing. How about night render to use all that lighting you have in there and maybe some from outside.

olishea · 2 Mar 2010, 18:25

Thank you Sid and good idea!! Not done many night renders so it'll be a challenge!! Will look great all lit up....

More images to come, got another cooking overnight

steelers05 · 2 Mar 2010, 21:19

These are very good images and I think progress is really showing.

A few crits though...the foreground plant is too close to the camera. It could certainly work in the scene, but it is not detailed enough to be that close to the camera. I think the bump levels on some of your materials are a bit high and that combined with the noise on some of the images creates a graineness that is a bit distracting. The only other thing is the glass....morely the joints..it seems like there should be some sort of frame. I could be wrong but that system seems like you would need some sort of frame or connector pieces for it to work and I think that would help add to the realism. But you also may have a system that is as your illustrating.?

Anyways, keep up the good work and id like to see a night scene as well.

massimo · 3 Mar 2010, 11:50

This last one has an amazing "airy breath". I like it very much! Only those pillars and roof beams made of glass ( ) worry me a bit.

olishea · 3 Mar 2010, 12:00

thanks steelers. im not going into all the structure im just the monkey. there is a frame can you not see it. the only part of the structure I didn't show is the joints between the structural members, they are not continuous as ive shown it.

the foreground plant should be blurred but not got round to it yet.

new one, bump reduced

olishea · 3 Mar 2010, 15:29

i know i know, but like i say im just the monkey!!

airy breath!! nice! cheers

I updated previous image with DOF blur to foreground foliage....

olishea · 3 Mar 2010, 15:29

left this one to cook a bit longer....

I normally don't like lens flares but I think it works in this image.

higher res version here:http://twilightrender.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=1351&p=11117#p11117

massimo · 3 Mar 2010, 15:44

Perhaps you can put in your glass conservatory this all glass table by Renzo Piano... The legs are pre-stretched with a steel cable in order to resist to the compression. It's called TESO (italian word that means stretched) made by FontanaArte. Added also a PDF.

teso.pdf