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    sepo
    last edited by 25 Feb 2010, 18:59

    Nice composition but it is bit green for my taste. ๐Ÿ‘

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      olishea
      last edited by 25 Feb 2010, 19:09

      still?!! you shoulda seen the raw render it was VERY green!

      i just cant get color balance right! Although I still wanted the glass to cast some green into the room....i like it like that!

      please PP it if you fancy I wont be offended! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

      oli

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        solo
        last edited by 25 Feb 2010, 19:13

        Oli, looks good, I may tone down the bump a little on the furniture.

        As far as the IBL/hdri goes, can you adjust the intensity? if yes then about 25% less would give a great result.

        http://www.solos-art.com

        If you see a toilet in your dreams do not use it.

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          olishea
          last edited by 25 Feb 2010, 20:56

          thanks pete.

          I'll give it a go when I render some more tomorrow.

          I updated original post with a warmer version, is it better?

          oli

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            olishea
            last edited by 26 Feb 2010, 17:22

            here is a tester, gonna leave it rendering over weekend.

            http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/scene2.jpg

            geometry:

            http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/hiddenline1.jpg

            geometry+ render =

            http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/lineover.jpg

            THNAKS TO SOLO FOR THE PLANTS, THEY LOOK GREAT! AND VERY SKETCHUP FRIENDLY!

            oli

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              nomeradona
              last edited by 1 Mar 2010, 14:06

              wow! excellent space and very nice render oli.

              visit my blog: http://www.nomeradona.blogspot.com

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                D-space
                last edited by 1 Mar 2010, 16:17

                Awesome render, looks pretty cleaned! ๐Ÿ‘
                Btw...does it shows caustics? ๐Ÿ˜‰

                http://blibestmentalt.no/54981

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                  michaliszissiou
                  last edited by 1 Mar 2010, 17:23

                  These are great renders oli. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
                  A so peaceful feeling, that really good. Not greenish (well just a bit). Some, just a little, magenta on highlights maybe..... ๐Ÿ˜†

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                    olishea
                    last edited by 2 Mar 2010, 09:53

                    thank you very much for all your kind words, your critical eyes keep me trying harder with each new project!! ๐Ÿ‘

                    oli

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                      sepo
                      last edited by 2 Mar 2010, 18:18

                      The last one looks very convincing. How about night render to use all that lighting you have in there and maybe some from outside.

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                        olishea
                        last edited by 2 Mar 2010, 18:25

                        Thank you Sid and good idea!! Not done many night renders so it'll be a challenge!! Will look great all lit up....

                        More images to come, got another cooking overnight ๐Ÿ˜„

                        oli

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                          steelers05
                          last edited by 2 Mar 2010, 21:19

                          These are very good images and I think progress is really showing.

                          A few crits though...the foreground plant is too close to the camera. It could certainly work in the scene, but it is not detailed enough to be that close to the camera. I think the bump levels on some of your materials are a bit high and that combined with the noise on some of the images creates a graineness that is a bit distracting. The only other thing is the glass....morely the joints..it seems like there should be some sort of frame. I could be wrong but that system seems like you would need some sort of frame or connector pieces for it to work and I think that would help add to the realism. But you also may have a system that is as your illustrating.?

                          Anyways, keep up the good work and id like to see a night scene as well.

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                            massimo Moderator
                            last edited by 3 Mar 2010, 11:50

                            This last one has an amazing "airy breath". I like it very much! ๐Ÿ‘ Only those pillars and roof beams made of glass ( โ“ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ โ“ ) worry me a bit. ๐Ÿ˜„

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                              olishea
                              last edited by 3 Mar 2010, 12:00

                              thanks steelers. im not going into all the structure im just the monkey. there is a frame can you not see it. the only part of the structure I didn't show is the joints between the structural members, they are not continuous as ive shown it.

                              the foreground plant should be blurred but not got round to it yet.

                              new one, bump reduced

                              http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/SCENE3_3_medium.jpg

                              oli

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                                olishea
                                last edited by 3 Mar 2010, 15:29

                                i know i know, but like i say im just the monkey!!

                                airy breath!! nice! cheers

                                I updated previous image with DOF blur to foreground foliage....

                                oli

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                                  olishea
                                  last edited by 3 Mar 2010, 15:29

                                  left this one to cook a bit longer....

                                  I normally don't like lens flares but I think it works in this image.

                                  higher res version here:http://twilightrender.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=1351&p=11117#p11117

                                  http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/scene2_medium.jpg

                                  oli

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                                    massimo Moderator
                                    last edited by 3 Mar 2010, 15:44

                                    Perhaps you can put in your glass conservatory this all glass table by Renzo Piano... ๐Ÿ˜† The legs are pre-stretched with a steel cable in order to resist to the compression. It's called TESO (italian word that means stretched) made by FontanaArte. Added also a PDF.


                                    p288803_488_336-1.jpg


                                    teso.pdf

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                                      olishea
                                      last edited by 3 Mar 2010, 16:26

                                      sweet! cheers for your interest massimo...renzo is a legend!

                                      i must admit i love all-glass furniture. how practical it is I don't know!!

                                      single piece glass table, bit common but impressive nonetheless:

                                      http://www.diamondliving.ie/images/products/All_Glass.jpg

                                      oli

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                                        olishea
                                        last edited by 5 Mar 2010, 16:16

                                        external, for practice really:

                                        comments appreciated, cheers.

                                        hidden geometry:

                                        http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/revision2_lines.jpg

                                        sketchup view:

                                        http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/revision2.jpg

                                        final render:

                                        http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/scene4_medium.jpg

                                        oli

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                                          D-space
                                          last edited by 5 Mar 2010, 17:12

                                          Hi Oli, I guess you're cruising when exterior shots are concern. Great renders as always. ๐Ÿ‘

                                          http://blibestmentalt.no/54981

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