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    • olisheaO Offline
      olishea
      last edited by

      Thank you Sid and good idea!! Not done many night renders so it'll be a challenge!! Will look great all lit up....

      More images to come, got another cooking overnight ๐Ÿ˜„

      oli

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      • S Offline
        steelers05
        last edited by

        These are very good images and I think progress is really showing.

        A few crits though...the foreground plant is too close to the camera. It could certainly work in the scene, but it is not detailed enough to be that close to the camera. I think the bump levels on some of your materials are a bit high and that combined with the noise on some of the images creates a graineness that is a bit distracting. The only other thing is the glass....morely the joints..it seems like there should be some sort of frame. I could be wrong but that system seems like you would need some sort of frame or connector pieces for it to work and I think that would help add to the realism. But you also may have a system that is as your illustrating.?

        Anyways, keep up the good work and id like to see a night scene as well.

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        • massimoM Offline
          massimo Moderator
          last edited by

          This last one has an amazing "airy breath". I like it very much! ๐Ÿ‘ Only those pillars and roof beams made of glass ( โ“ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ โ“ ) worry me a bit. ๐Ÿ˜„

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          • olisheaO Offline
            olishea
            last edited by

            thanks steelers. im not going into all the structure im just the monkey. there is a frame can you not see it. the only part of the structure I didn't show is the joints between the structural members, they are not continuous as ive shown it.

            the foreground plant should be blurred but not got round to it yet.

            new one, bump reduced

            http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/SCENE3_3_medium.jpg

            oli

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            • olisheaO Offline
              olishea
              last edited by

              i know i know, but like i say im just the monkey!!

              airy breath!! nice! cheers

              I updated previous image with DOF blur to foreground foliage....

              oli

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              • olisheaO Offline
                olishea
                last edited by

                left this one to cook a bit longer....

                I normally don't like lens flares but I think it works in this image.

                higher res version here:http://twilightrender.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=1351&p=11117#p11117

                http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/scene2_medium.jpg

                oli

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                • massimoM Offline
                  massimo Moderator
                  last edited by

                  Perhaps you can put in your glass conservatory this all glass table by Renzo Piano... ๐Ÿ˜† The legs are pre-stretched with a steel cable in order to resist to the compression. It's called TESO (italian word that means stretched) made by FontanaArte. Added also a PDF.


                  p288803_488_336-1.jpg


                  teso.pdf

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                  • olisheaO Offline
                    olishea
                    last edited by

                    sweet! cheers for your interest massimo...renzo is a legend!

                    i must admit i love all-glass furniture. how practical it is I don't know!!

                    single piece glass table, bit common but impressive nonetheless:

                    http://www.diamondliving.ie/images/products/All_Glass.jpg

                    oli

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                    • olisheaO Offline
                      olishea
                      last edited by

                      external, for practice really:

                      comments appreciated, cheers.

                      hidden geometry:

                      http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/revision2_lines.jpg

                      sketchup view:

                      http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/revision2.jpg

                      final render:

                      http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu269/olishea/scene4_medium.jpg

                      oli

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                      • D Offline
                        D-space
                        last edited by

                        Hi Oli, I guess you're cruising when exterior shots are concern. Great renders as always. ๐Ÿ‘

                        http://blibestmentalt.no/54981

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                        • massimoM Offline
                          massimo Moderator
                          last edited by

                          Veeery niiice!!! I can feel the warmth of the sun. โ˜€

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                          • olisheaO Offline
                            olishea
                            last edited by

                            thanks dspace and massimo!!

                            I wish I could feel the warmth I'm bloody freezin!!

                            higher res version and settings here: http://twilightrender.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=1351&start=40

                            oli

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                            • michaliszissiouM Offline
                              michaliszissiou
                              last edited by

                              @olishea said:

                              thanks dspace and massimo!!

                              I wish I could feel the warmth I'm bloody freezin!!

                              higher res version and settings here: http://twilightrender.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=1351&start=40

                              I told you before, some more magenta lights can really makes you feel some warmth. ๐Ÿ˜†

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                              • olisheaO Offline
                                olishea
                                last edited by

                                yeah I did mate, first thing I did pretty much...made huge difference. i think the colour is ok with this one. ๐Ÿ˜• lol i meant im cold in my office!! ๐Ÿคฃ

                                oli

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                                • ken28875K Offline
                                  ken28875
                                  last edited by

                                  Great renders, Oli. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

                                  Cheers!

                                  -KN

                                  Follow Your Dreams.

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                                  • olisheaO Offline
                                    olishea
                                    last edited by

                                    cheers ken!

                                    oli

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                                      choppir
                                      last edited by

                                      Nice work Oli

                                      I like the glass on the last image!

                                      choppir

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                                      • D Offline
                                        dylan
                                        last edited by

                                        Oli, what have you used to create the transitions and compile the video?
                                        They seem a little fast to me. It's a good idea though and still looks good.

                                        Keynote is worth a look, has some great transitions.

                                        http://dmdarchitecture.co.uk/

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                                        • olisheaO Offline
                                          olishea
                                          last edited by

                                          its google picasa Dylan.

                                          The transitions are very nice and smooth...then as soon as you put them on youtube! boom! bad quality! might try vimeo instead.....

                                          its just a normal fading transition, nothing fancy. I made them fast because long transitions looked even worse on youtube.

                                          oli

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                                          • holmes1977H Offline
                                            holmes1977
                                            last edited by

                                            Amazing stuff Oli

                                            Fantastic renders. You really have come along way.

                                            Exaggeration makes a dull story better.

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