Since I don't think is all scrap, please be more detailed on what you think was wrong in order I can try improve it... wich texture? and wich forniture? eg the left part is almost exactly my living room

this is a scene wich I've been played around for a while, now I'm just fed up with it

impressive!!!
if i were been there, I'd screamed : ONCE AGAIN!

absolutely... great work, great integration... ok , I wanna find something to comment ... I don't like the caustics in the pool, in the night shots

not a thing escapes you! You're right, I noticed the sea surface was bended but didn't realize the background was too high
...one more lesson to learn tridem...

here is my last attempt...

Hi Roger, thanks for your suggestions once again. I like your version, there's another point of view I want to render (time permitting...) surely I'll take it into account.
Luca

I've seen it a year ago and it shocked me, I thought: in this age of technologies I was believing I've seen all possible... and then came out those two hands creating a wonderful story.
These days in Italy there's a similar work in a TV spot but I'm not sure the author is the same

So, I've done some adjustements, in the meantime the girl has gone, I'm sorry
raw KT view plus light flares added, I'm gonna work on Gimp.
I thought back to the environment reflections, I'll keep just the light coming from the spherical sky, I've seen the scene also from another point of view and I believe it's ok

that's what I mean for screenshot and rendering, the first is the raw sketchup model; the second one is the result of a rendering done with an external application or a plugin. By 'clip composition' I meant several object images cuted and pasted on the main picture

Hi Natasha, actually your pictures seems a clip composition rather than a rendering, the result looks nice, would you share a Sketch screenshot?

Hi Andy, nice work it would be interesting seeing the raw sketchup picture

@olishea said:

how come you are using MLT preset? what's the advantage?..

as I know, there are no really alternatives for a interior nightime shot. apart MLT gives the best result in terms of realism, biased methods need very high settings to resolve the complexity of lights and reflections. perhaps wait anyhow 10 hours or more, and finally find the picture full of white dots... no thanks

thanks guys for precious comments
@Steelers: I know the sharpness is very bad but a such image takes 10 hours to cook, I'm trying to improve it before spending much more time to render.
@Roger: totally agree about the left light, thanks for letting me notice it. Since the sea is a background picture it doesn't produce reflections, I should add them in postpro like the reflection of the girl on the ground... but I'm not so sure those reflections could be so visible into the room...I'll think it over

@swindel said:

2 pillows that have the exact same shadow..

..it means there was nothing more noticeable to comment
well, I assume the rest is perfect

PS. For this last one I'd like getting some 'style' comments. I mean, I easily see myself the technical issues and possible improvements, but about the composition of the scene, color tones, point of view etc. better I need other people's impressions

@Dspace - I remember your Mini Cooper scene, once again you park your bikes without kickstand
btw ... nice work

another one, this is my first attempt with 2d people added in postpro, I usually don't like silhouettes, but it seems this is not too bad
Still a lot of material and lighting issues... and absolutely too much noise, I've promised myself to work again on this scene, but it takes a lot of time to get clear

@pichuneke said:

..In fact I have been told that some people from spain sells spanish olive oil to italy, and there they put it in bottles as "product of italy"..

since your olives breathe italian air it's obvious their flavour will improve

Hi teofas, for me it's a masterpiece, good materials, good lighting, good environment.
If I had to suggest an improvement, maybe you could straighten the camera in order to adjust the vertical lines, expecially near the edge of the picture (eg the left column) they annoy a bit.
Cheers, Luca