Old church Garden

[L i am]

Hi I just created this loosely based on an old old painting. Modelled in Sketchup and rendered in TM

[Mike Amos]

@L-i-am
Not sure mate, to be honest it's a bit 'flat'.

It certainly does not carry that atmosphere you are so good at, whether that is the subject or not I cannot say.

Sorry, clueless this time.

[Rich O Brien]

@L-i-am I always like to see SketchUp geometry so I can establish where the actual work stops and the asset library stuff begins.

I agree with @Mike-Amos that it appears a bit 'flat'. I think its the overuse of the same material. Also those crack decals contrast too much being so dark.

Its a nice composition though.

[Mike Amos]

@L-i-am

I think on reflection, that I would rotate the view around the water feature.

Show more of the walls below the roof on the left side. Might demonstrate depth a little better.

[Bryan K]

Looks good to me. On a cloudy day, the lighting is correct.