LIBRARY RENDER. PLEASE HAVE A LOOK

TLD · 28 Jun 2011, 15:26

Hello Guys,

Here is a my library render using Vray 1.49. The model was done in sketchup and post production in Photoshop. I am new to vray and I was hoping to have your criticisms on this.

Thank you very much people. Look forward to posting more renders.

unigami · 28 Jun 2011, 16:08

Wow...that looks great!

TLD · 28 Jun 2011, 16:13

@unigami said:

Wow...that looks great!

Thanks for ur opinion unigami

srx · 28 Jun 2011, 18:33

Great start! Maybe too much sharpness filter (or high pass)?

dorfpunk · 28 Jun 2011, 19:34

That looks really good. The sharpness point is well made. The chairs look a bit too intense in the foreground - too shiny for an indoor shot. The plants look a little bit too much the same. I really like the windows and relationship with outside. It reminds me of the little library I used to hang out in on cold days when I was living in Berlin. There are a couple of textures that are tiling a bit but then again carpet really does that, as does the wood vaneer used for most shelving so I don't know.

Anyway, that's my opinion - great stuff.

TLD · 29 Jun 2011, 08:30

@srx said:

Great start! Maybe too much sharpness filter (or high pass)?

Thanks for the criticism. I wasnt really sure how to bring out all the detail on the window (which i think i havent still understood).

I would try tweaking the high pass to see if that helps... thanks again!

TLD · 29 Jun 2011, 08:43

@dorfpunk said:

That looks really good. The sharpness point is well made. The chairs look a bit too intense in the foreground - too shiny for an indoor shot. The plants look a little bit too much the same. I really like the windows and relationship with outside. It reminds me of the little library I used to hang out in on cold days when I was living in Berlin. There are a couple of textures that are tiling a bit but then again carpet really does that, as does the wood vaneer used for most shelving so I don't know.

Anyway, that's my opinion - great stuff.

Thank you very much for your comment. The library is a full scale design with identical reading modules placed on different landings. I have noted the tiling issue and the chairs may just be a little too shiny for the interior shot...(still getting a hang of materials) the carpet...is a default sketchup material. Any help on making carpets look more in depth and realistic is welcomed.

The plants were rotated a bit to make them look uneven...maybe this view would help...

Thank you once again

Bryan K · 30 Jun 2011, 17:05

Very nice! I'd visit regularly.

TLD · 5 Jul 2011, 11:42

@bryan k said:

Very nice! I'd visit regularly.

Thank you! feel free to comment...

Hussel Hann · 2 Mar 2012, 14:56

i wouldn't even know it was rendered if you're not telling

hellnbak · 2 Mar 2012, 15:45

In one of the magazines page 20 is missing
(hey, you wanted criticism )

Really, very nice work although I agree that the plants need variety, maybe same pots but different kinds of plants. That what I noticed first.

ScottPara · 2 Mar 2012, 19:14

Things are far to orderly
The chairs are to perfectly pushed in and lined up
Turn the lights on
Add wall switches and outlets
The wall seem to have a bit too much specularity

Overall these are really quite good it is just missing the details.

Scott

Stinkie · 2 Mar 2012, 19:51

@unknownuser said:

The wall seem to have a bit too much specularity

That's bad GI, I think.

The texture on the bookshelves is way too small.

Vicspa · 2 Mar 2012, 20:45

Very nice renders, but some of the books are facing the wrong way, the white pages should face in. Or am I seeing it wrong.

Stinkie · 2 Mar 2012, 22:44

TLD, could you post your IR and LC settings?

hack_of_headgehog · 3 Mar 2012, 10:46

very nice

TLD · 8 Mar 2012, 19:31

@unknownuser said:

Things are far to orderly
The chairs are to perfectly pushed in and lined up
Turn the lights on
Add wall switches and outlets
The wall seem to have a bit too much specularity

Overall these are really quite good it is just missing the details.

Scott

Wow did not really see into all those details...thanks so much for the observation. Appreciated

TLD · 8 Mar 2012, 19:35

@hellnbak said:

In one of the magazines page 20 is missing
(hey, you wanted criticism )

Really, very nice work although I agree that the plants need variety, maybe same pots but different kinds of plants. That what I noticed first.

Page 20 is missing??? (amazing criticism by the way)

Thanks for the observation. Perhaps I have a key desire to make things a bit too orderly But a bit of variation would surely do no harm .

TLD · 8 Mar 2012, 19:36

@unknownuser said:

Very nice renders, but some of the books are facing the wrong way, the white pages should face in. Or am I seeing it wrong.

HMMMM...another interesting opinion. You do have a point. This forum is the best.

TLD · 8 Mar 2012, 19:40

@unknownuser said:

TLD, could you post your IR and LC settings?

Sure i would. Been a while since I worked on this particular project. I would revisit it and attempt to recreate the view (hoping I get the same result or better) and put up the requested settings.