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  • D Offline
    dirkkkk
    last edited by dirkkkk 13 Jun 2010, 20:25

    Hi Guys...

    Would like to know what you all think about this render.. Pleas all C&C is welcome

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      jo-ke
      last edited by 13 Jun 2010, 22:45

      The building looks great but for me there are too many people walking on the grass.

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        Bryan K
        last edited by 14 Jun 2010, 07:33

        I like the style.

        See my portfolio at https://delphiscousin.blogspot.com/

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          solo
          last edited by 14 Jun 2010, 17:41

          I agree with the odd glow, maybe some vignetting would fix it?

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            massimo Moderator
            last edited by 14 Jun 2010, 18:13

            Nice image, Dirk. πŸ‘ What looks a bit odd to me is the glow around the building and the material of the windows. I mean glasses are a bit dull and have a strange traslucency and color (it seems a twilight color, but your sky is a daylight one) and no reflections.

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              FoXar
              last edited by 16 Jun 2010, 16:41

              Inspiring! Lovely style and great images! Thumbs up! πŸ‘

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                dirkkkk
                last edited by 16 Jun 2010, 17:58

                Hi all thanks for the reactions..

                I want to post this one.. it a more clean render.
                I decided to render the exterior whit some settings. and starded over in PS.. C&C most welcome + an interior view of the building


                0.0047 PS render small.png


                interior small.png

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                  Frederik
                  last edited by 16 Jun 2010, 19:47

                  I like the last render A LOT...! Well done...! πŸ‘

                  Cheers
                  Kim Frederik

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                    holmes1977
                    last edited by 16 Jun 2010, 20:41

                    Still not sure on the reflection of the exterior render.

                    But the interior is dam perfect. Nice soft mood. Great use of materials

                    Exaggeration makes a dull story better.

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                      flipya
                      last edited by 16 Jun 2010, 20:48

                      I can't see the original exterior anymore but if memory serves me right I liked it better. People on the grass still odd. The interior's really great, absolutely love it! I never dare to go for such a pale low-contrast image but it really works...

                      Is that the intro to NOS Journaal on the TV?

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                        Richard
                        last edited by 16 Jun 2010, 23:50

                        Very nice interior there mate, the only thing that i'm not sure of is two eames chairs in scene seems a bit out of whack!

                        Camera angle is a REAL winner for this shot! And the timber feature wall a real eye catcher!

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                          Stinkie
                          last edited by 17 Jun 2010, 15:40

                          Great images. πŸ‘

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                            dirkkkk
                            last edited by 17 Jun 2010, 17:08

                            Hi all thanks for the kind reactions for the interior renders πŸ˜„..
                            "ow trouwens flipya dat is de NOS inderdaad"

                            So I need to work on the exterior, about the people on the grass that is clients request. πŸ˜„
                            As some of you say I need the remove some reflection from the windows, Thats what I tried in this render.. Pleas let me know your reaction πŸ˜„


                            exterior small.png

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                              hobbnob
                              last edited by 17 Jun 2010, 17:19

                              yeah I like it without the reflections more

                              My WIP Thread:Here

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                                Stinkie
                                last edited by 17 Jun 2010, 17:58

                                Looks good/ziet er goed uit.

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                                  FoXar
                                  last edited by 17 Jun 2010, 18:15

                                  @hobbnob said:

                                  yeah I like it without the reflections more

                                  +1

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                                    dirkkkk
                                    last edited by 19 Jun 2010, 10:33

                                    thanks for the reactions, I appreciate it a lot πŸ˜„

                                    If you have some suggestions to improve my exteriors pleas say so... πŸ˜„

                                    Thanks all

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                                      hobbnob
                                      last edited by 19 Jun 2010, 15:12

                                      well down the far end of the building it doesn't look right, it might be too bright, idk, it just looks funny

                                      My WIP Thread:Here

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                                        dirkkkk
                                        last edited by 19 Jun 2010, 17:13

                                        ahh thanks,

                                        what do you think about this


                                        0.png

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                                          hobbnob
                                          last edited by 19 Jun 2010, 17:14

                                          Much better yeah

                                          My WIP Thread:Here

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