Another house render
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I have about 8 days off for christmass shutdown. Have been looking forward to practice my skills, so am just posting as I do them. This time I studied the compostion of a well known 3D artist and this was the result.
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Wow! Perfect!
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^ and no messing. Very sharp and made my day to see it.
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Overall I like this one a lot….
Just a couple of comments.. not a big fan of the “up lights” along the front wall, it’s just a personal preference thing, have never much liked them… also curious about the drive, it seams the texture is pretty repetitive although that may be your intent. Still a really nice job -
@tuna1957 said:
Overall I like this one a lot….
Just a couple of comments.. not a big fan of the “up lights” along the front wall, it’s just a personal preference thing, have never much liked them… also curious about the drive, it seams the texture is pretty repetitive although that may be your intent. Still a really nice job Fair enough about the light also. The repetative (Not a driveway) is all geometry, individual 400x400 pavers.
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@l i am said:
@tuna1957 said:
Overall I like this one a lot….
Just a couple of comments.. not a big fan of the “up lights” along the front wall, it’s just a personal preference thing, have never much liked them… also curious about the drive, it seams the texture is pretty repetitive although that may be your intent. Still a really nice job Fair enough about the light also. The repetative (Not a driveway) is all geometry, individual 400x400 pavers. However when I think about it if it reads as repetative, it reads as repetative
I am going the give all the tiles different materials to my paving so I can control the texture more. It is ironic that in me effort for detail I made it look like a poorly tiled material. Thanks I will correct that -
Thats why I post here, constructive critism is gold
Tuna here is my resonse to your observation. Should have picken up on that myself 
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I vetually did the pavers bit by bit, and moved the uplights a suggested
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This last image really “hits on all cylinders” for me.
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Very very nice.
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If there was such a thing as more perfect, this would be it.
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As seems usual for me I have updated. If you look trough the house you will see the owner in the back garden. There was a scaling issue fixed and rear wall with stretched material removed, other plants added to the rear. Denoiser turned on for a less grainy result overall.........welcome to my neurosis
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Excellent!
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Very nice to see your photography lessons worked out well worth the time, Is that a Canon Eos for those shots?
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