WIP continues: comments please...
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Different view, same tech (this thread: http://www.sketchucation.com/forums/scf/viewtopic.php?f=81&t=11811 ), quieter colors...and I'm happy. (Oh yeah, my client architect in CT responded today with the opposite verdict: likes the loosie-goosie WC better...says "the PR's I've seen lately are almost spooky real", so developing both is the plan :`)
How they looking to you guys, thanks?
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tomsdesk, this one is even more to my taste than your last one. especially image number one - more subtle. I think you really got there now. glad, your client liked it.
Jakob
ps: I very much appreciate that you opened up a new thread for this one - I don't like it, if one thread carries on for too many pages. like this we entered a new stage, a new level and can go on from here.
thank you very much for sharing your works. together with all the highly valuable and informative comments these threads are pleasantly educational
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Thanks Jakob...now it's: "off we go into the wild blue yonder..." Here's a little better DWC (IMO, still needs some atmospheric perspective work):
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Very first exterior with this...just under the wire:
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whereas I liked the previous images, I truely love this exterior! amazing job, Tom. would very much like to see more of those
the semitransparent trees, half washed out guardrails at the front, the slightly diffuse glow - really a great composition.
somehow this image with the birds and the old VW-Käfer has an almost gloomy, worn look. don't know if it was intendet - I like it anyway. -
Thanks Jakob, I'm pleased too ('cept the color of the sky isn't quite comfortable with the rest...?). I think the gloomy and worn (perfect description BTW) is my going overboard with the sketchy edge extension.
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Tom,
Theyre all good. Personally I find the flying things distracting. Otherwise bellisimo.
Allen
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Tom,
Really nice image
, but IMO the birds steal too much focus. Try exporting them seperately with a much looser/lighter style without the extension lines. The effect is really cool though - I would keep that in the memory bank for future use.bytor
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Thanks guys...and point taken about the birds (a bit too Hitchcock maybe :`) Here's a quick fix blend, more later I'm sure:
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