Fransworth House
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@hellnbak said:
Wow! I hate it when people post images too small to really see anything, but this thing is HUGE! Probably the largest I've ever seen here on the forums. You might want to scale it back just a tad
Sorry For the HUGE image
was testing my new pc and some new settings i learned recently.@daniel said:
I was always under the impression the Farnsworth House used glazing for the exterior walls.
It's obvious you're using the same plant components again and again - the same orientation and size. Try randomly rotating and rescaling them to give the appearance of variety.
that was clay render, and yes agreed with u on the plant component, actually i was trying to use fur plugin to generate it but i dont know why it wont place the vray proxies on the terrain , always elevated and away from terrain.
@solo said:
Fransworth house? is this the desert version of Farnsworth house?
Yes inspired from Disney's Classic The Legend of Lobo .
@pbacot said:
Looks like a miniature in sand dunes at the beach. Looking good. Like the miniature Huskies too. We have huskies.
Thank you
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Raw Render.. plz comment on my post production too.
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I would recommend adding variation to the orientation and size of the vegetation.
The groundcover textures needs to be larger res and not as noticably tiled.
Maybe adjust the image cropping to respect the rule of thirds? For some reason my eye ends up looking at the grass in the foreground or the hill in the background. The house is not taking precedence.
I like the concept though.
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@rich o brien said:
I would recommend adding variation to the orientation and size of the vegetation.
The groundcover textures needs to be larger res and not as noticably tiled.
Maybe adjust the image cropping to respect the rule of thirds? For some reason my eye ends up looking at the grass in the foreground or the hill in the background. The house is not taking precedence.
I like the concept though.
Thanks for the tips brien, will surely change the texture and plants. and i scale down the house
thats why.. am gona use wood texture next instead of white color. lets see -
Plant are huge.
If you want to prevent repetition, you may use 2 diffuse layer over each other and then add a transparency to the upper layer, maybe using "Tex_Noise" or simillar textures. here is a sample material, while you may replace your own textures.
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I adjust the textures and grass. here is re render.. comments and criticism are welcome.
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The original raw render was with out tall grass, i overlay the previous render with this one and get this result
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Some things that I noticed -
One of the Huskies looks like it's about to fall over. Repositioning the legs gives it a more natural stance
Repeating a major object (the tree) is very noticeable. Messing around with it a bit and repositioning some of the branches helps
The top steps look like they are floating, they don't connect to the lower deck.
A quick and dirty shot with my suggestions
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Those are some big-ass rabbits.
You appear to have the rendering part down, but need to work some more on the composition.
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Your background image is being used incorrectly.
You can see the distortion.
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