Industrial loft

pugz1983 · 24 Aug 2012, 21:56

Hey Guys,

Been a long time since my last post. Busy on a project right now. Wanted to share this scene I've been working on in the little spare time. Model made in SU and render with Vray.
Love some feedback.

Greetz Twan

beginner · 24 Aug 2012, 22:03

Looks great

Rich O Brien · 25 Aug 2012, 00:31

It's nice but wouldn't you bang your head if you stood up?

Cyberdactyl · 25 Aug 2012, 04:18

Looks nice. The only thing I would suggest to bump it a touch, would be to detail the stair's W-beams where they meet the floor. Pouring the floor around the beams is very unlikely.

fymoro · 26 Aug 2012, 12:43

Wow....I love your render.....

ninopiamonte · 27 Aug 2012, 02:13

Nice render.
Maybe you could blacken the lamps & add reflection.

DVERGER · 27 Aug 2012, 08:58

A beautiful image.
Where do you find items like the sofa or table ?
Do you use 2pt perspective?
Maybe a little reflection on the floor make the image more realistic.

Daniel · 27 Aug 2012, 15:52

Looks great, Twan.

boofredlay · 27 Aug 2012, 19:21

Very nice scene.

ninopiamonte · 28 Aug 2012, 02:35

@dverger said:

A beautiful image.
Where do you find items like the sofa or table ?
Do you use 2pt perspective?
Maybe a little reflection on the floor make the image more realistic.

The furnitures he used are from DesignConnected, and they are free.

Krisidious · 28 Aug 2012, 03:36

Photo Realistic... No Really.

pugz1983 · 28 Aug 2012, 07:59

Thanx for the nice comments and tips. I will give the floor some more reflection and will bump up the concrete on the ceiling.

I guess you are right that someone might bump their head when standing up when sitting on the left side of the sofa. I think this is a design vs usability question.

Greetz Twan

pibuz · 28 Aug 2012, 18:34

Ehi Twain! Wonderful scene and materials!!!!
I hope you don't mind if I played a little with your image: I gave it a little more contrast and I think it looks better.

Richard · 28 Aug 2012, 23:50

I probably like the lower contrast version. Well done mate - I certainly though would try and enliven the image, the dull pillows aren't helping. You could use something on the back wall left to introduce some colour, this would help balance the image too!

BTW nice job on the gal steel!!!!!!!

Bryan K · 3 Sept 2012, 00:02

Gah! Will I ever be this good?

Well done!

mitraniulian · 19 Sept 2012, 11:00

MORE THEN EXCELENT - i wold kill for a room like that

allanx · 19 Sept 2012, 11:24

Very real congrats...I also like pibuz version with contrast...

allanx

sinju · 24 Sept 2012, 13:06

Just a word : Fantastic !