My MA Renders

Tobobo

@trogluddite said:

("Where's the jet-pack I was promised as a kid?"; I always want to ask them).

I'm still waiting for my hover board, and rehydrated large pizzas.

Daniel

Toby, I'd make the computer screen taller (can they ever be large enough?) and raise it to eye level.

Tobobo

Thats a good thought, they are pretty large at the moment. I will look into it. Here is the latest render.

Proposed Render Scene 2.png

rspierenburg

Nice render, I really like the ceiling with the lights

pbacot

You might have to consider issues of reflections with all that glass (not knowing what the critique will include). I see you faced stations towards the windows which will reduce back glare but will create a forward glare issue in contrast to the screen, unless these are high-tech adjustable windows. Also you may have access to some new technology that controls glare on computer screens?

Working on a pre-design for an office now. To fully utilize natural light versus computer use is difficult imho.

We would like some of those stations for our GIS lab! I want one, myself!

and really, that's great rendering.

Tobobo

@rspierenburg said:

Nice render, I really like the ceiling with the lights

Thanks, the celling was simple to make but has had the biggest impact.

Here is the image file i used.

Celling Tile.jpg

@pbacot said:

You might have to consider issues of reflections with all that glass (not knowing what the critique will include). I see you faced stations towards the windows which will reduce back glare but will create a forward glare issue in contrast to the screen, unless these are high-tech adjustable windows. Also you may have access to some new technology that controls glare on computer screens?

Working on a pre-design for an office now. To fully utilize natural light versus computer use is difficult imho.

We would like some of those stations for our GIS lab! I want one, myself!

and really, that's great rendering.

Thanks a lot, the rendering is still quite new to me.

The current windows come with blinds so that will translate onto the final write up. Its just blinds make for a boring render.

I'm just rendering another image with more light and a few additions.

Daniel

Toby, some constructive criticism:

The composition of the rendering empahasizes the aisleway leading to the doors in the background. One really doesn't get a good look at the workstations.
It appears to be just one work station lined up after another. Why not break that up with something in the middle, such as a seating area, meeting space, etc.

The glas partitions look nice