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    • boofredlayB Offline
      boofredlay
      last edited by

      SU + Podium


      WU2 screen.jpg

      http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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      • DanielD Offline
        Daniel
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        Nice image, Eric, but where's the graffiti?
        Puddles of water a nice touch, btw.

        My avatar is an anachronism.

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        • M Offline
          mike d
          last edited by

          Eric
          Looks good

          The grass is always GREENER on the roof.

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          • M Offline
            mateo soletic
            last edited by

            I really like it. Great work Eric. Is that guy going up the stairs 2d or 3d.

            [Concept Illustrations](http://concept-illustrations.com/)

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            • boofredlayB Offline
              boofredlay
              last edited by

              Thanks.
              Just one of the standard 3d people that come with SU.

              http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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              • boofredlayB Offline
                boofredlay
                last edited by

                Here is an updated image.


                WU3.jpg

                http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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                • B Offline
                  BTM
                  last edited by

                  Nice job! where are the puddles coming from though? I'd put some wet spots on the stairs, or on the ceiling above to puddles, just so they don't look like they appeared out of nowheres πŸ˜„

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                  • marked001M Offline
                    marked001
                    last edited by

                    this is very cool.... i want to think the puddles should maybe be darker? like the concrete is soaked with water?

                    http://www.revision21vis.com

                    instagram: revi21on

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                    • boofredlayB Offline
                      boofredlay
                      last edited by

                      @unknownuser said:

                      Nice job! where are the puddles coming from though? I'd put some wet spots on the stairs, or on the ceiling above to puddles, just so they don't look like they appeared out of nowheres πŸ˜„

                      Thanks.
                      Well there is a peeled back panel above the far puddle.

                      @marked001 said:

                      this is very cool.... i want to think the puddles should maybe be darker? like the concrete is soaked with water?

                      Good tip. I would not have thought of that.

                      http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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                      • boofredlayB Offline
                        boofredlay
                        last edited by

                        Update.


                        WU4.jpg

                        http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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                        • olisheaO Offline
                          olishea
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                          good stuff boo

                          the puddles seem a little too unnatural, I cant put my finger on it. They seem viscous somehow. whats this image for btw?

                          oli

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                          • DanielD Offline
                            Daniel
                            last edited by

                            Looks great, Eric.

                            My avatar is an anachronism.

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                            • marked001M Offline
                              marked001
                              last edited by

                              @olishea said:

                              good stuff boo

                              the puddles seem a little too unnatural, I cant put my finger on it. They seem viscous somehow. whats this image for btw?

                              maybe if the actual texture is painted to be a little darker..then extend the darkness/wetness a bit beyond the puddle? might help 'ground' it.

                              http://www.revision21vis.com

                              instagram: revi21on

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                              • boofredlayB Offline
                                boofredlay
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                                Thanks again guys. Daniel, it is hard to see but the graffiti in the middle right says Daniel πŸ˜†
                                Also, I made The Daily CatchUp as the "tossed" newsprint to the lower left. I think leaving it out would help the image however.

                                Again, great tip about the wet Jason. I might try it soon.

                                Oli, this is just for practice. I wanted to see if I could create this type of mood purely with Podium and no post processing. I got the idea from a piece of artwork I saw recently. I might try it with Vray next.

                                http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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                                • G Offline
                                  gasher
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                                  These look great I have 0 rendering experience, yet, so my comment comes with no expertise.

                                  It seems the nearest puddle is sitting above the level of the concrete as opposed to having the liquid flow into the depression it would find on an unlevelled surface. I think the added 'viscosity' is related to the reflected light coming from the closest puddles near left edge, as opposed to it sitting level with the concrete. Maybe the water that would flow through this space would have some added grit and be 'less clear' after seeping through the ground or running off down the stairs... not sure if that would effect how natural the water looks to the eye...

                                  These are mere observations as I have no clue how you can change it πŸ˜„

                                  Maybe I should start reading a rendering manual...

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                                  • boofredlayB Offline
                                    boofredlay
                                    last edited by

                                    Great suggestions once again.
                                    Here are a couple more. I made a depression in the pavement rather than have the water on top. Much better, thanks. And I got rid of that CatchUp Newsprint lower left πŸ˜‰

                                    Also, I noticed on my work machine that the image was much darker than on my home machine and much of the detail was lost. So the second one is lighter, same image just lighter.

                                    Let me know what you think.


                                    WU5.jpg


                                    WU5(light).jpg

                                    http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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                                    • G Offline
                                      gasher
                                      last edited by

                                      I really think that near puddle looks great. Well done! πŸ˜„

                                      Actually I think the whole image looks great...

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                                      • S Offline
                                        Sir
                                        last edited by

                                        the lighter one is defo the better image, gives the impression theres some light from behind the observer and that they're close to the other side of the underpass too.

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