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    • marked001M Offline
      marked001
      last edited by

      started this yesterday and need to finish it by wednesday.... ultimately, its going to be rendered in maxwell.. here is what i've got so far.. the majority of the modelling done... modelled everything aside from the chairs, conference table, and ductwork, which i got off of formfonts.. all edges are bevelled.. have to finish up some small details and then onto texturing.. client just has an overall concept in plan..so i have to do figure out details in elevation..


      http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/8541/kciv2101908zu9.th.jpg

      http://img360.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif

      http://www.revision21vis.com

      instagram: revi21on

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      • plot-parisP Offline
        plot-paris
        last edited by

        ah, that looks promising. I am looking forward to see the first render!

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        • marked001M Offline
          marked001
          last edited by

          alright..here is a quick first pass... obviously, some lighting issues...not much 'color' either..need to talk to the designer more about finishes...


          http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/8906/kci102008hb7.th.jpg

          http://img366.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif

          http://www.revision21vis.com

          instagram: revi21on

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            bubbalove
            last edited by

            Looking sweet Jason!

            "Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." - Churchill

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            • marked001M Offline
              marked001
              last edited by

              thanks guys.. got some more direction.. so i'll update this afternoon..

              have a new machine running Vista 64...for some reason, the export crashes after 2% every time i try to export this model to maxwell πŸ˜• works fine on my XP 32 machine.. so annoying..no problems with any other models..so i have to export this on my XP machine..then drag it over to the Vista machine and render πŸ˜• hopefully this is not a common occurrence..so many problems with Vista so far!

              http://www.revision21vis.com

              instagram: revi21on

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              • plot-parisP Offline
                plot-paris
                last edited by

                nice render indeed. freaky floor. looks like its really whet. is it something stony or is it more in the direction of linoleum (sorry can't tell, cause my screens at the office are not too good) πŸ˜‰

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                • marked001M Offline
                  marked001
                  last edited by

                  thanks...its a polished concrete..maybe a little 'too' polished..haha..

                  http://www.revision21vis.com

                  instagram: revi21on

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                  • marked001M Offline
                    marked001
                    last edited by

                    here's an update..getting better (I think?) still some issues..noise around those lights...the glass sign behind the desk isnt working too well.. white wall paint has a green tint to it.. any help/comments are greatly appreciated..


                    http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/7799/kcirev4102108lo1.th.jpg

                    http://img512.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif

                    http://www.revision21vis.com

                    instagram: revi21on

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                      ScottPara
                      last edited by

                      Jason,

                      The last one is great (even with some minor issues you pointed out). Can I ask what are your render times like? What SL are you running at?

                      Scott

                      Love the fact that some HATE my avatar.....

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                      • marked001M Offline
                        marked001
                        last edited by

                        I think that one was like 9 hours.. .hit around SL 17... i think the combination of glossy WHITE materials and the translucent plastic on the laps is really contributing to the noise πŸ˜• i'll pay closer attention to the time/SL on the next one.. might try creating a blue ags material for the lights to help with the noise..

                        http://www.revision21vis.com

                        instagram: revi21on

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                        • marked001M Offline
                          marked001
                          last edited by

                          guess i'm stuck for now.. had this issue last night but eventually resolved it.. keep getting 'ERROR: Render Failed" everytime i try to render from studio.. really frustrating...

                          http://www.revision21vis.com

                          instagram: revi21on

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                          • marked001M Offline
                            marked001
                            last edited by

                            ok.. here's a quick noisy progress image.. time/date/location is off so disregard those strong shadows...but made some changes to the signage..which needs to be darker..and added a few small details..


                            http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/6593/kcirev5102208ga9.th.jpg

                            http://www.revision21vis.com

                            instagram: revi21on

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                            • marked001M Offline
                              marked001
                              last edited by

                              and here's the 'final' for my client.. could've been clearer..but that glossy white wall plus the emitter up against those translucent pieces of the light really killed it.. this output for like 17 hours and hit an SL of 17.. i'm not sure there was much differce after like 10 hours though..


                              http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/917/kcifinal102308ja3.th.jpg

                              http://img151.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif

                              she shot down the cowhide rug..haha..but i might do one for myself with the rug in there πŸ˜„

                              http://www.revision21vis.com

                              instagram: revi21on

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                                mike d
                                last edited by

                                jason looks good

                                The grass is always GREENER on the roof.

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                                  rangerrick
                                  last edited by

                                  Nice job on this, it looks great πŸ‘ , although I think I prefer the red material you used for the lights in the first render. πŸ˜‰

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                                    cheffey
                                    last edited by

                                    It looks great, as usual. If you do re-render change the seating to black leather to match the Holstein cow rug.

                                    BROSRŌMAN BRΓ„UN

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                                    • marked001M Offline
                                      marked001
                                      last edited by

                                      good idea, steven! for which chairs?

                                      i like the red better too... buuuut, blue is the company's color so blue it was πŸ˜• not sure i'm a huge fan of these fixtures in this space.. a little big..i had to shorten them way up just to fit them in there.

                                      http://www.revision21vis.com

                                      instagram: revi21on

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                                      • marked001M Offline
                                        marked001
                                        last edited by

                                        did one more with the rug πŸ˜„


                                        http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/597/kci102708ax9.th.jpg

                                        http://img381.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif

                                        http://www.revision21vis.com

                                        instagram: revi21on

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                                          ScottPara
                                          last edited by

                                          Great work Jason. A little noise to clear up but nothing a little time wont take care of.

                                          Scott

                                          Love the fact that some HATE my avatar.....

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                                          • allanxA Offline
                                            allanx
                                            last edited by

                                            I think there are too much noise on your rendering and the tiling of pattern in the doorway is very obvious....
                                            You need to smooth out those guest chairs to make it look realistic and those flowers in the table are not helping your scene at all.

                                            allanx

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