Posts made by Kontroliora

@box said:

It's worth pointing out that to a natural English speaker, "Gold Fish Restaurant" isn't a great name.
It suggests two things,

Either you are serving "Goldfish" which are pet fish that people tend not to eat.
or
The restaurant is a "Goldfish Bowl" and therefore anyone eating there will be "On Display".

Perhaps "The Gilded Fish" or "Golden Seafood" but steer clear of "The Brown Mullet".

The error comes from the translation Bulgarian - english. I do not want to argue but the name is not the most important thing. This is visualization after all. No hard feelings

@dave r said:

Very nice work.

A whole restaurant for these?

And any other aqua creatures but these looks good.
I'm glad you like it

@krisidious said:

Is this a place where you watch goldfish while you eat or do you eat gold fish?

This is fish restaurant or may be call it seafood restaurant as you like it.
This is just the name of the restaurant.

@bryan k said:

Looks good!

Thanks Bryan

Hi all. This is a restourant that i made last days.
Sorry for the missing "au" in visualization but i saw it too late
All C&C are welcome. I hope you liked it.
Skp 8, Vrfsu, Ps
Best Regards V.Dimitrov

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@bryan k said:

Very nice!

Thanks

Some corrections. straighten the verticals and low saturation

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@chedda said:

I mean a different camera angle and field of view. Looking directly at the corner is perhaps not the best angle for this shape. Regarding the straight verticals i think in this case it's particulary usefull. The perspective lines now converge to a point like a pyramid they lead the eye up and to the middle. When you are drawn to this point there is no focal point in the model or sky, if they were more vertical the eye would be drawn to the centre of the building. I am no expert this is just my opinion. Regarding improvements C&C etc i agree by always saying my next render is my best render. By making images we often become quite introverted and a 3rd persons viewpoint helps for a clear view.

One more thing in this building we don't see any of the surroundings reflected in the glass perhaps because you added them in post. It's these little extras that make the difference IMHO.

I also think the perspective is a little more than normal. Thanks

@macker said:

For architectural shots it really, really, really helps if you straighten the verticals. Sketchup even has a two point perspective that will do this for you.

I have not use this function in sketchup until now. Thanks

Thanks for the comment. I am trying to improve my renders every time and that is the point.

@chedda said:

I think the cameras could be better along with the lighting.

I can't understand. Do you mean that a dark areas is too darker and I have to light up.

@chedda said:

Did you make some post processing adjustments ?

I made a lot of adjustments in PS. The sky, people , grass, flowers, trees, levels, exposure ...

Hi all.
I want to show you a project I was working on the last days.
SKP 8, vray, PS
C&C welcome

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Тhanks for the critique Macker. I admire your work.
This was actually my goal. Still learning vray. The bad thing is that the exterior is more difficult for me than the interior. The raw render is just the house and probably i fail in PS work.
The large tree in the background is brush in PS. The front door is up the steps to the left. I am not modeling nothing inside, so I decided to put on darker windows whit sky reflections.

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Hi all. This is house that I did last weekend. Hope u like it.
SKP 8, vray, PS
C&C welcome

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This is the material. I dont know how to say in English.

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One quick,simple and clean bedroom 3D models - 3D warehouse
Texturing rendering and PP - 2 hours
Hope you like it . C&Coments Welcome
Sketchup 8, Vray, PS

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Thank you guys for the replys.
Urban design - just take the terrain from google earth and i use drop tools to bring drawing on the terrain.

@carloh said:

overall nice project, but on the first two pictures three things are really disturbing me.

1. the paving needs a curb.

2. for the ground concrete texture you really should use something that is tileable.

3. the car is out of scale.

I am agree whit you Carloh especially for the car. The time was too short for me and i have not seen this details.

Hi all.
I dicide to post my graduated project who include urbanization and one apartment building.
Some parts of the land will growing to the water. The Building is the red one. C&C Welcome. Hope u like it and sorry for my english
Sketchup 8 , Vray, PS

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I made it from tutorial. Hope u like it. C&Coments welcome.
Sketchup 8, vray, PS

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Realy nice.

@mrmikeesq said:

I like that nice wood floor. What renderer is this?

The render engine is Vray