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    • panixiaP Offline
      panixia
      last edited by

      I'm trying to push a bit my skills with vray, still lot of work to do..
      any critcism/suggestions from you vray masters would be very appreciate. in particular lighting-wise..
      thank you.


      test cucina openspace 01.jpg

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      • Bryan KB Offline
        Bryan K
        last edited by

        My personal taste would be to zoom in closer on the kitchen. The foreground is too distracting.

        I would also have more light coming in through the windows.

        Other than that, it's looking good!

        See my portfolio at https://delphiscousin.blogspot.com/

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        • panixiaP Offline
          panixia
          last edited by

          thank you for your comment.
          actually i'm preparing more than one scene, so there will be a couple of closeup for the kitchen itself..
          also i'm planning to add some more details and objects here and there (and of course reduce the size of the white wall's bump 😳 ) and render some scenes with artificial lights.
          i don't know about the lighting from windows..
          but if i increase it, the white walls and flor near the windows look too washed out..
          not 100% sure how to manage this..


          test inquadratura ingresso.jpg


          snack.jpg


          corner.jpg


          test inquadratura cucina.jpg

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          • broomstickB Offline
            broomstick
            last edited by

            These are good looking renders indeed. Only two things attract my attention:

            1 - work on lighting, try to give a color to the light that's coming through the windows. It's a bit too white right now.

            2 - Try improving the floor material, it's not very realistic right now

            other than that, nice job!!

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            • panixiaP Offline
              panixia
              last edited by

              grazie. i didn't think about give a color to the sunlight. maybe i can try to add little yellow. nice idea!

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              • Bryan KB Offline
                Bryan K
                last edited by

                Oh! Those are better! Much better.

                See my portfolio at https://delphiscousin.blogspot.com/

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