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    • D Offline
      dirkkkk
      last edited by

      This is an fictional office complex I designt to test my skills...
      I would like to know what you all think about it, all C&C are welcome.

      | http://www.dwanimations.org | Dirk de Jongh |


      forum 1.jpg


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        mateo soletic
        last edited by

        Great looking images, well done. 👍

        [Concept Illustrations](http://concept-illustrations.com/)

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        • DanielD Offline
          Daniel
          last edited by

          Looks geat, Dirk. The only thing missing are some people or other scale references.

          My avatar is an anachronism.

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            cheffey
            last edited by

            excellent work! I like the way your website works as well.
            what's your favorite rendering engine?

            BROSRŌMAN BRÄUN

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              Huggkruka
              last edited by

              I would add some people(oh no my shiny perfect world invaded! 😛 ) to get a sense of scale. If that is a two story house, there really isn't a lot of floor space. Very nice and smooth picture otherwise.

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              • soloS Offline
                solo
                last edited by

                Those are fantastic renders and a great detailed model

                What rendering app did you use?

                OMG!! I navigated to your site ... I dunno if I want to cry or worship you.

                http://users.atw.hu/swb/smile/zokog.gif

                http://users.atw.hu/swb/smile/magyaraz.gif

                I am inspired to reach your level, thanks for sharing and setting the bar a little higher for me.

                http://www.solos-art.com

                If you see a toilet in your dreams do not use it.

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                  linea
                  last edited by

                  😲

                  Beautiful work, beautiful website

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                  • R Offline
                    remus
                    last edited by

                    Good stuff, i like the architecture as well.

                    http://remusrendering.wordpress.com/

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                    • D Offline
                      dirkkkk
                      last edited by

                      wow...

                      people thanks for the replays,
                      I will work on the people in my renders, Do you all think the tree`s look ok?

                      solo and linea thank you for all the compliments about my site, glad you liked it. Id just started my one small company, so thats ware the site is for. I only need a client now 😉 unfortunately thats not so easy.

                      I will post more renders when I am able to render the interior.
                      My render engine is Maxwell and Vray

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                        mateo soletic
                        last edited by

                        Dirkkkk,
                        I had a look at Your site and those top interior presentations are one of the best
                        I have ever seen, they are just amazing. 👍

                        @unknownuser said:

                        I`d just started my one small company, so thats ware the site is for. I only need a client now 😉 unfortunately thats not so easy.

                        You are so right here . From My own experience I can tell You that it took me Years to get some good regular clients maybe 5-6 of them that pay 80% of my bills. So its a big world out there but they are not exactly hurling in.

                        [Concept Illustrations](http://concept-illustrations.com/)

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                          bertb
                          last edited by

                          Well done, Dirk
                          Success !
                          BertB

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                          • StinkieS Offline
                            Stinkie
                            last edited by

                            @solo said:

                            I dunno if I want to cry or worship you.

                            The first option would be best, as our friend here, if memory serves me right (correct me if I'm wrong, Dirk), is about ... twenty. 😄

                            Great stuff indeed!

                            Dirk, it would probably be a good idea if you let an editor take a look at the text on your site, just so everything is right up there on the same high level.

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                              steelers05
                              last edited by

                              Lot of great work you got going. Best of luck with your company. I am curious about the vegetation you used in a lot of your images, any insight into that?

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                                chango70
                                last edited by

                                😲 😲 This is SU? I can't believe it! The furniture models, did you make them or imported from Max? 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍

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                                • pugz1983P Offline
                                  pugz1983
                                  last edited by

                                  Hey Dirk,

                                  Alles goed? Heb je misschien nog tips voor beginnende ondernemers op dit gebied. Wil graag een eigen ontwerp studio opzetten. Ben zelf veel aan het renderen en een vriend van me is zeer sterk in het ontwerpen.

                                  Groeten uit Limburg

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                                    Gareth
                                    last edited by

                                    great technique, very nice clean images Dirk...well done

                                    ....i prefer images without people and cars...the best architectural photographs rarely ever show people in them (strange though, when i think that the purpose of the building is for humans...)but they look much better without them...

                                    ....it's all about the architecture...!!....and you have achieved that...!!

                                    Cheers,

                                    Gareth

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                                      Wo3Dan
                                      last edited by

                                      @unknownuser said:

                                      ........
                                      I would like to know what you all think about it, all C&C are welcome.

                                      Hi Dirkkkk,

                                      C&C not only restricted to those two nice renders, I hope.
                                      Your site looks great, the way you set it up. And so do the renders.
                                      However, there is something wrong with some of them that you do need to take care of.
                                      Shaddows from vertical objects (like window frames) on horizontal planes (floors) should be parallel if sunlight is involved. In some renders it's obvious that the light source is to close to your model.
                                      Take it as a minor hint, not as criticism.

                                      Looking forward to seeing more of your work!!

                                      All the best with your young company (in Hollands glasstad).
                                      Wo3Dan

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                                        dirkkkk
                                        last edited by

                                        Thanks all for the VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY nice comments 😍 ,

                                        Wo3Dan,
                                        I do not know exactly what you mean whit the shadows...?

                                        pugz1983,
                                        (in Dutch)Tips voor starters heb ik nog niet echt een nuttig atvies... ik ben zelf pas een maandje begonnen, en de markt is krap dat weet ik wel maar s6.. 😄

                                        Gareth,
                                        Tanks mate relay appreciate what you are saying.

                                        chango70,
                                        Tanks for the commend, the most model`s I made my self an some are from the 3D warehouse..

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                                        • Wo3DanW Offline
                                          Wo3Dan
                                          last edited by

                                          @unknownuser said:

                                          ......
                                          Wo3Dan, I do not know exactly what you mean whit the shadows...?
                                          ........
                                          Dirk,

                                          What I mean is that at least in some of the 'Plattegronden' the information you get from the geometry
                                          contradicts what the shadows are telling about the model.....unless the light source is close.
                                          With exaggerated FoV it would be more difficult to tell but in some 'almost' topviews where walls
                                          left and right are sort of parallel on screen it becomes noticable.
                                          Have a look at attached file (with basic geometry of one of your 'plattegronden').

                                          Wo3Dan


                                          Shadows_Dirkkkk.skp

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