• Login
sketchucation logo sketchucation
  • Login
πŸ€‘ SketchPlus 1.3 | 44 Tools for $15 until June 20th Buy Now

DUTCH office complex

Scheduled Pinned Locked Moved Gallery
19 Posts 16 Posters 1.5k Views 16 Watching
Loading More Posts
  • Oldest to Newest
  • Newest to Oldest
  • Most Votes
Reply
  • Reply as topic
Log in to reply
This topic has been deleted. Only users with topic management privileges can see it.
  • D Offline
    dirkkkk
    last edited by 11 Nov 2008, 19:10

    This is an fictional office complex I designt to test my skills...
    I would like to know what you all think about it, all C&C are welcome.

    | http://www.dwanimations.org | Dirk de Jongh |


    forum 1.jpg


    forum 2.jpg

    1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
    • M Offline
      mateo soletic
      last edited by 11 Nov 2008, 19:14

      Great looking images, well done. πŸ‘

      [Concept Illustrations](http://concept-illustrations.com/)

      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
      • D Offline
        Daniel
        last edited by 11 Nov 2008, 19:19

        Looks geat, Dirk. The only thing missing are some people or other scale references.

        My avatar is an anachronism.

        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
        • C Offline
          cheffey
          last edited by 11 Nov 2008, 19:20

          excellent work! I like the way your website works as well.
          what's your favorite rendering engine?

          BROSRŌMAN BRΓ„UN

          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
          • H Offline
            Huggkruka
            last edited by 11 Nov 2008, 19:21

            I would add some people(oh no my shiny perfect world invaded! πŸ˜› ) to get a sense of scale. If that is a two story house, there really isn't a lot of floor space. Very nice and smooth picture otherwise.

            1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
            • S Offline
              solo
              last edited by 11 Nov 2008, 19:30

              Those are fantastic renders and a great detailed model

              What rendering app did you use?

              OMG!! I navigated to your site ... I dunno if I want to cry or worship you.

              http://users.atw.hu/swb/smile/zokog.gif

              http://users.atw.hu/swb/smile/magyaraz.gif

              I am inspired to reach your level, thanks for sharing and setting the bar a little higher for me.

              http://www.solos-art.com

              If you see a toilet in your dreams do not use it.

              1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
              • L Offline
                linea
                last edited by 11 Nov 2008, 20:15

                😲

                Beautiful work, beautiful website

                1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                • R Offline
                  remus
                  last edited by 11 Nov 2008, 20:25

                  Good stuff, i like the architecture as well.

                  http://remusrendering.wordpress.com/

                  1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                  • D Offline
                    dirkkkk
                    last edited by 12 Nov 2008, 05:53

                    wow...

                    people thanks for the replays,
                    I will work on the people in my renders, Do you all think the tree`s look ok?

                    solo and linea thank you for all the compliments about my site, glad you liked it. Id just started my one small company, so thats ware the site is for. I only need a client now πŸ˜‰ unfortunately thats not so easy.

                    I will post more renders when I am able to render the interior.
                    My render engine is Maxwell and Vray

                    1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                    • M Offline
                      mateo soletic
                      last edited by 12 Nov 2008, 06:59

                      Dirkkkk,
                      I had a look at Your site and those top interior presentations are one of the best
                      I have ever seen, they are just amazing. πŸ‘

                      @unknownuser said:

                      I`d just started my one small company, so thats ware the site is for. I only need a client now πŸ˜‰ unfortunately thats not so easy.

                      You are so right here . From My own experience I can tell You that it took me Years to get some good regular clients maybe 5-6 of them that pay 80% of my bills. So its a big world out there but they are not exactly hurling in.

                      [Concept Illustrations](http://concept-illustrations.com/)

                      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                      • B Offline
                        bertb
                        last edited by 12 Nov 2008, 07:45

                        Well done, Dirk
                        Success !
                        BertB

                        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                        • S Offline
                          Stinkie
                          last edited by 12 Nov 2008, 08:04

                          @solo said:

                          I dunno if I want to cry or worship you.

                          The first option would be best, as our friend here, if memory serves me right (correct me if I'm wrong, Dirk), is about ... twenty. πŸ˜„

                          Great stuff indeed!

                          Dirk, it would probably be a good idea if you let an editor take a look at the text on your site, just so everything is right up there on the same high level.

                          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                          • S Offline
                            steelers05
                            last edited by 12 Nov 2008, 17:36

                            Lot of great work you got going. Best of luck with your company. I am curious about the vegetation you used in a lot of your images, any insight into that?

                            1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                            • C Offline
                              chango70
                              last edited by 12 Nov 2008, 23:32

                              😲 😲 This is SU? I can't believe it! The furniture models, did you make them or imported from Max? πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

                              1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                              • P Offline
                                pugz1983
                                last edited by 17 Nov 2008, 16:23

                                Hey Dirk,

                                Alles goed? Heb je misschien nog tips voor beginnende ondernemers op dit gebied. Wil graag een eigen ontwerp studio opzetten. Ben zelf veel aan het renderen en een vriend van me is zeer sterk in het ontwerpen.

                                Groeten uit Limburg

                                1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                                • G Offline
                                  Gareth
                                  last edited by 22 Nov 2008, 22:25

                                  great technique, very nice clean images Dirk...well done

                                  ....i prefer images without people and cars...the best architectural photographs rarely ever show people in them (strange though, when i think that the purpose of the building is for humans...)but they look much better without them...

                                  ....it's all about the architecture...!!....and you have achieved that...!!

                                  Cheers,

                                  Gareth

                                  1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                                  • Wo3DanW Offline
                                    Wo3Dan
                                    last edited by 22 Nov 2008, 23:40

                                    @unknownuser said:

                                    ........
                                    I would like to know what you all think about it, all C&C are welcome.

                                    Hi Dirkkkk,

                                    C&C not only restricted to those two nice renders, I hope.
                                    Your site looks great, the way you set it up. And so do the renders.
                                    However, there is something wrong with some of them that you do need to take care of.
                                    Shaddows from vertical objects (like window frames) on horizontal planes (floors) should be parallel if sunlight is involved. In some renders it's obvious that the light source is to close to your model.
                                    Take it as a minor hint, not as criticism.

                                    Looking forward to seeing more of your work!!

                                    All the best with your young company (in Hollands glasstad).
                                    Wo3Dan

                                    1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                                    • D Offline
                                      dirkkkk
                                      last edited by 23 Nov 2008, 12:21

                                      Thanks all for the VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY nice comments 😍 ,

                                      Wo3Dan,
                                      I do not know exactly what you mean whit the shadows...?

                                      pugz1983,
                                      (in Dutch)Tips voor starters heb ik nog niet echt een nuttig atvies... ik ben zelf pas een maandje begonnen, en de markt is krap dat weet ik wel maar s6.. πŸ˜„

                                      Gareth,
                                      Tanks mate relay appreciate what you are saying.

                                      chango70,
                                      Tanks for the commend, the most model`s I made my self an some are from the 3D warehouse..

                                      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                                      • Wo3DanW Offline
                                        Wo3Dan
                                        last edited by 24 Nov 2008, 15:48

                                        @unknownuser said:

                                        ......
                                        Wo3Dan, I do not know exactly what you mean whit the shadows...?
                                        ........
                                        Dirk,

                                        What I mean is that at least in some of the 'Plattegronden' the information you get from the geometry
                                        contradicts what the shadows are telling about the model.....unless the light source is close.
                                        With exaggerated FoV it would be more difficult to tell but in some 'almost' topviews where walls
                                        left and right are sort of parallel on screen it becomes noticable.
                                        Have a look at attached file (with basic geometry of one of your 'plattegronden').

                                        Wo3Dan


                                        Shadows_Dirkkkk.skp

                                        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                                        • 1 / 1
                                        1 / 1
                                        • First post
                                          5/19
                                          Last post
                                        Buy SketchPlus
                                        Buy SUbD
                                        Buy WrapR
                                        Buy eBook
                                        Buy Modelur
                                        Buy Vertex Tools
                                        Buy SketchCuisine
                                        Buy FormFonts

                                        Advertisement