Which sounds better.
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I need some quick advice.I am doing some Billboard designs for the local
airport that have to be finished Yesterday and they sent me this text:
NO1.
It seems kind of akward so I made a suggestion no2.
Which sounds better.Thanks.
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Id say number 2, it reads better.
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#2
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Mateo,
I like your suggestion better, but both seem kind of awkward. It seems to me that this ad is trying to circumvent or educate the perception of the standard flyer that it is useless to purchase anything if you still have to get on the plane - because you might get it taken away.
I would suggest something more along the lines of
Buy Duty-Free and take it all with you, worry free
Special sealed bag allows you to fly with everything you buy - even liquidsI dunno though, maybe just me. I did like your suggestion better.
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no 2
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2
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Number 2 is clearer, but they might be counting on the catch phrase "buy & fly" from their original slogan.
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Thank You all.
@unknownuser said:
Buy Duty-Free and take it all with you, worry free
Special sealed bag allows you to fly with everything you buy - even liquidsShaun,
I agree with Your points and this sounds great, but that might proove
too complicated for other non English speaking passengers to understand.
Then they will say change it and more work for me.And nice to see You back.
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By the way:
Are 'liquid' eyes admitted?!Cornel
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Everything can go as long as its sealed in the bag.
I suppose then that even explosives can go.
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If you go with #2, use a lower case Y on the second "you". Otherwise the eye stops too quickly, anticipating a new thought.
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