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      remus
      last edited by

      Id say number 2, it reads better.

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        boofredlay
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        #2

        http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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          Shaun Tennant
          last edited by

          Mateo,

          I like your suggestion better, but both seem kind of awkward. It seems to me that this ad is trying to circumvent or educate the perception of the standard flyer that it is useless to purchase anything if you still have to get on the plane - because you might get it taken away.

          I would suggest something more along the lines of
          Buy Duty-Free and take it all with you, worry free
          Special sealed bag allows you to fly with everything you buy - even liquids

          I dunno though, maybe just me. I did like your suggestion better.

          Whether they find a life there or not, I think Jupiter should be called an enemy planet.

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            mike d
            last edited by

            no 2

            The grass is always GREENER on the roof.

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              tomsdesk
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              2

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                Daniel
                last edited by

                Number 2 is clearer, but they might be counting on the catch phrase "buy & fly" from their original slogan.

                My avatar is an anachronism.

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                  mateo soletic
                  last edited by

                  Thank You all.

                  @unknownuser said:

                  Buy Duty-Free and take it all with you, worry free
                  Special sealed bag allows you to fly with everything you buy - even liquids

                  Shaun,
                  I agree with Your points and this sounds great, but that might proove
                  too complicated for other non English speaking passengers to understand.
                  Then they will say change it and more work for me.

                  And nice to see You back. ๐Ÿ˜„

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                    cornel
                    last edited by

                    By the way:
                    Are 'liquid' eyes admitted?!

                    Cornel

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                      mateo soletic
                      last edited by

                      Everything can go as long as its sealed in the bag.
                      I suppose then that even explosives can go. ๐Ÿ‘Š

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                        Marlise
                        last edited by

                        If you go with #2, use a lower case Y on the second "you". Otherwise the eye stops too quickly, anticipating a new thought.

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