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    • T Offline
      tomsdesk
      last edited by

      Since even my old eyes notice the difference between the 800max pixels there and the 700max pixels here, and since I'm asking for some considered help, thought I'd post links to the full size images (all are a bit over 1meg):

      http://www.sketchucation.com/forums/scf/sas/Gallery/SketchUp/NHCA7-23SU.jpg
      http://www.sketchucation.com/forums/scf/sas/Gallery/SketchUp/NHCA7-23WC.jpg
      http://www.sketchucation.com/forums/scf/sas/Gallery/SketchUp/NHCA7-24SU.jpg
      http://www.sketchucation.com/forums/scf/sas/Gallery/SketchUp/NHCA7-24WC.jpg

      Thanks again in advance!

      http://www.tomsdesk.moonfruit.com/
      2.5D Trees & Shrubs!

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      • J Offline
        jfmalone
        last edited by

        Nice effect. Thanks for sharing

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        • marked001M Offline
          marked001
          last edited by

          daaaammnnnn..loving the birds! i dont know..the fluorescent green trees still get me 😉 but maybe they work on this one.. either way, this is coming along awesome.

          http://www.revision21vis.com

          instagram: revi21on

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          • DanielD Offline
            Daniel
            last edited by

            Looks great, Tom. The second images looks a little crowded on the right side, IMHO. I think there are too many birds. You might also look at adjusting your view slightly so the fountain does not line up (and hide) the corner of the building. I like the people in the windows, that is a nice touch. Great looking renderings.

            My avatar is an anachronism.

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            • Darth ChocolateD Offline
              Darth Chocolate
              last edited by

              Even though lurking is my style
              Tom’s work has always made me smile
              Life inserted those birds do bring
              A cheery heart felt warmth of spring
              Colors, man colors abound
              Bringing 2d up off of the ground
              While cheap peeps I’m happy you did share
              Their place might be suited better elsewhere
              Views one and three have caught my ear
              For texture, life, song and cheer

              Chocolate is cheaper than therapy and you don’t need an appointment.

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              • GaieusG Offline
                Gaieus
                last edited by

                @darth chocolate said:

                Even though lurking is my style
                Tom’s work has always made me smile
                Life inserted those birds do bring
                A cheery heart felt warmth of spring
                Colors, man colors abound
                Bringing 2d up off of the ground
                While cheap peeps I’m happy you did share
                Their place might be suited better elsewhere
                Views one and three have caught my ear
                For texture, life, song and cheer

                😄

                Gai...

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                • T Offline
                  tomsdesk
                  last edited by

                  Jeez, I'm pleased...
                  good start to now!
                  But Louise, it's no breeze...
                  must list the dou:

                  1> Study the page setup in pieces, not just as a whole:
                  Edge only as a line drawing for eye whimsy and gridlock
                  Shadow only as a B&W wash drawing for composition gut (and giggle :`)
                  Color only as a color wash drawing for spirit splash and puddle
                  Materials only as a PR drawing for brain candy and backwash

                  i.e. find the crap splatter before you (Tom) find those square centimeters that seductively flirt and you (Tom!) will love to look at mostly
                  

                  On my knees...
                  continue how?

                  http://www.tomsdesk.moonfruit.com/
                  2.5D Trees & Shrubs!

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                  • D Offline
                    Dave M
                    last edited by

                    The two things that immediately popped into my head are 1) in the post-processing in Photoshop, adding some white highlights to the water from the fountain will make it come alive, and 2) I think the people behind the windows are reading a little strong. In one of the rendering workshops I took, we were advised to really tone down and gray out stuff we wanted to represent as behind glass.

                    The birds are such a cool damn touch. Again with the life in your work...

                    Dave

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                    • Darth ChocolateD Offline
                      Darth Chocolate
                      last edited by

                      @tomsdesk said:

                      On my knees...
                      continue how?

                      The colors you have chosen
                      Are just right for me
                      Only a minor change
                      Would I like to see

                      The bright green trees
                      Bring muse and life
                      Some say too bright
                      I say, “Just Right!”

                      With birds in flight
                      Bringing life and whimsy
                      Stale cardboard “peeps”
                      Just seem too “flimsy”

                      Now don’t take my words
                      As my brain tends to wander
                      Other’s opinions here
                      You must also ponder

                      Yet stay to your style
                      As it is wonderfully neat
                      Just please post the final
                      For all of us to see

                      Chocolate is cheaper than therapy and you don’t need an appointment.

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                      • EdsonE Offline
                        Edson
                        last edited by

                        darth,
                        your poetry is most welcome. do come out of lurking more often.

                        tom,
                        the only thing that occurs to me is to tone down the sky. to my money it is competition with the elements you want to show.

                        edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre • brasil
                        http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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                        • T Offline
                          tomsdesk
                          last edited by

                          Played a bit with the suggestions so far...thank you very much! More natural tree greens, put some glass in front of the building folks, less color sat over all, and did some painting on the peeps which helps a bunch I think (not enough, I know Willy, but still trying to save those bytes :`) No where near a finished but some progress to the WIP, I think...?

                          Have to think more about those peeps...their night-of-the-living-deadness, though fun and a noticeable grin-play with the "WC-animated" buildings, they really don't work with the "live" birds...huh?)

                          Seems we are still in 700 pixel width mode, sorry:

                          http://www.sketchucation.com/forums/scf/sas/Gallery/SketchUp/tn_NHCA7-bert-WC2.jpg

                          http://www.tomsdesk.moonfruit.com/
                          2.5D Trees & Shrubs!

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                          • GaieusG Offline
                            Gaieus
                            last edited by

                            @unknownuser said:

                            Seems we are still in 700 pixel width mode, sorry:

                            Sorry Tom - you can actually (still) post 800 pix wide images - the only problem is that the forum software crops them on the right.
                            The old board used to "explode" the style and push the right border out.

                            This is not something we st; it's coded so there's nothing we could do about it.


                            And I like your work as much as before (there's just too little time to react and comment as much as before now)

                            Gai...

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                            • Darth ChocolateD Offline
                              Darth Chocolate
                              last edited by

                              Some separate peeps posted
                              By others for free
                              Or standard 2D peeps
                              That simply “face me”
                              Should do the trick, and make it stick

                              I’m still diggin’
                              Shots one and three
                              They have the most
                              Comfortable feel to me

                              Chocolate is cheaper than therapy and you don’t need an appointment.

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                              • boofredlayB Offline
                                boofredlay
                                last edited by

                                I am in agreement with the Jamocha Jedi. 😄
                                I really like the first and the third views you posted. Color wise and texture wise. Just a bit more "active" people and it is good as gold.

                                Great work as usual Tom. 😎

                                http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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                                • P Offline
                                  Phil Rader AIA
                                  last edited by

                                  Sorry Tom I have not formulated an opinion or reviewed the images long enough to give a pertinent comment, However the poetry from Darth brang a smile to my face So I wanted to thank them for that.

                                  http://www.philrader.com

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