Simple Bedroom

[Mike Amos]

Thanks, it's missing something, I know not what.

[Bryan K]

Nice! That come out really good!

[Mike Amos]

Thanks, mate.

[Bryan K]

@mike amos said:

Thanks, mate.

Small suggestion? The curtain? Duplicate it and put the copy between the windows to cover that blank section of wall.

[Mike Amos]

Thanks mate, I'll give that a go.

[loco]

Great start. Maybe change the camera angle to eye level. You have a ceiling light I think, maybe include this in the image. Also maybe increase the exposure a little.

[Mike Amos]

Thanks mate, I'll give that a whirl. I must admit I was wondering about the camera height but a bit tunnel visioned on having some slippers near the bed too.

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[nlipovac]

You nailed it!
My two cents would be to move the light so that it fills more interior and if you graze curtains so some light passes through them it would be great.

[Bryan K]

Nice! That really helps fill the blank space. The whole scene looks a lot fuller.

The slippers and robe are a great touch as well. The headboard looks brighter as well.

Top notch! I would swear that's a photo.

[Mike Amos]

Ta mate, the height suggestion made me think and I think the validity of the suggestion is made. One light adjusted in Irfanview the other natural render level.

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[Bryan K]

Perfect. Wow!

[Mike Amos]

Thanks Bryan, appreciated mate.

[tuna1957]

Great progression of your model

[Mike Amos]

Cheers mate, I have had a few comments on the bathrobe which does look a bit like there was way too much starch in the wash. Yukkk.

[L i am]

The last one is a vast improvement, and really good work Mike

[Mike Amos]

Thanks mate, trying the dappled leaf's suggested by Fletch, it might make more difference when I learn how to do it better.

The idea is to have a png of leaves outside the window to give dappled light through the window, the version here is one 'pane' over the two windows. Not sure about it but there is something in this imho. Have to thank Fletch on the Twilight forum for that suggestion.

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