Grumman G-44 Widgeon
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@andyc said:
Lovely model. Compositionally I'd go for a lower camera angle (I think your background plate could just about sustain this), and would tilt the aircraft slightly off horizontal, to make it feel a bit more dynamic. Great work
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Excellent suggestion.
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Suggested composition change. Tweaked lighting. Props coming next.
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Looks good. My only thought is that I'd tilt the nose of the plane up just a touch more. See how at the moment the wings and horizontal tail-planes seem to touch? Tilt the nose up a bit and you'll get a bit of blue sky between them, and the model will "read" better. Hope that makes sense. Such a great, clean model!
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@andyc said:
Looks good. My only thought is that I'd tilt the nose of the plane up just a touch more. See how at the moment the wings and horizontal tail-planes seem to touch? Tilt the nose up a bit and you'll get a bit of blue sky between them, and the model will "read" better. Hope that makes sense. Such a great, clean model!
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Good suggestion. I agree. Will do that.
Thanks!
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@andyc said:
My only thought is that I'd tilt the nose of the plane up just a touch more.
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By golly you're right! Looks much better now
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Some minor fixes.
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Final.
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Hey Brian these textures might be handy
Also this HDRI http://macmave.blogspot.de/2012/09/free-over-clouds-hdri-map.html
The sky works fine check it out !
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Thanks Simon! Both downloaded.
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Sorry there have been no updates. My day job has been very busy this month.
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