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    • wychylylybymyW Offline
      wychylylybymy
      last edited by wychylylybymy

      Hi guys,

      what you thing about this? C&C are welcome

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      • Bryan KB Offline
        Bryan K
        last edited by

        I like the style and overall render, but I can't see how the sculpture facade is attached to the building.

        And is that a twin in the background? πŸ˜„

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        • wychylylybymyW Offline
          wychylylybymy
          last edited by

          thx.

          I still work on it πŸ˜‰

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          • olisheaO Offline
            olishea
            last edited by

            Crits: car looks very small. There seems to be rays of light coming in from two different directions. A camera would have a short exposure during a sunny day like this; the walking person would not have motion blur at all. Black wall material is a bit too flat.

            Its a really great start though, only some minor issues standing out. πŸ‘

            oli

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            • wychylylybymyW Offline
              wychylylybymy
              last edited by

              @olishea said:

              Crits: car looks very small. There seems to be rays of light coming in from two different directions. A camera would have a short exposure during a sunny day like this; the walking person would not have motion blur at all. Black wall material is a bit too flat.

              Its a really great start though, only some minor issues standing out. πŸ‘

              thx.
              I must think about the shadow. This scene i use Hdri and Sun light. hmm πŸ˜•

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              • hellnbakH Offline
                hellnbak
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                @olishea said:

                the walking person would not have motion blur at all.

                Unless they were a superhero team and traveling at super speed 😎

                "Politicians are just like diapers -- they need to be changed often, and for the same reason"

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                • wychylylybymyW Offline
                  wychylylybymy
                  last edited by

                  @hellnbak said:

                  @olishea said:

                  the walking person would not have motion blur at all.

                  Unless they were a superhero team and traveling at super speed 😎

                  how much to raise / blur to make it look real?

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                  • olisheaO Offline
                    olishea
                    last edited by

                    no need to blur during day time shot. I would suggest none at first and maybe add a slight touch to one of the legs if you are determined to emphasize the movement. Don't worry so much about entourage, get other bits sorted first and they should just fall into place.

                    oli

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                    • GarethG Offline
                      Gareth
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                      Ditto to the comments made above + perhaps work on the paving material too and model the paving joints and junction to the grass area

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