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[WIP] Renovation of an 70ties Bungalow

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  • J Offline
    jo-ke
    last edited by 16 Dec 2010, 07:59

    I didn't post renders for some weeks because I'm working on a project and I was still training modelling and rendering.

    furniture is by warehouse or modelled by myself. rendered with twilight

    here are the first pictures of the project. c&c are wellcome.

    Thank you


    kr001.jpg


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    kr003.jpg


    kr004.jpg


    kr005.jpg

    http://www.zz7.de

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      ScottPara
      last edited by 16 Dec 2010, 11:56

      The lack of a face in the first image is a bit creepy.

      Scott

      Love the fact that some HATE my avatar.....

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      • G Offline
        Gaieus
        last edited by 16 Dec 2010, 12:02

        That's for privacy reasons, Scott, you now. Like in GE Street View where faces are blurred out.

        Jo-ke; I like the building actually. Would be a cool place for big partying!
        πŸ˜„

        Gai...

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        • J Offline
          jchau2007
          last edited by 16 Dec 2010, 14:30

          I love the openess of the space. The wood color in your rendering is rather red. Is this what you are trying to archive? Thus the space is rather large, the red wood color makes the space really cold. I would like to see the original wood color to warm up the space. That's just my 2 sense.

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            cadmunkey
            last edited by 16 Dec 2010, 15:10

            Love the space, would like to see more renders.

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            • C Offline
              CAntonis
              last edited by 16 Dec 2010, 15:58

              Love the place.
              I ll be watching to see final renders to check out materials.

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                Daniel
                last edited by 17 Dec 2010, 15:55

                Looks good. Some constructive criticism:

                The bookcase on the left in the first rendering looks flat - you might want to consider outlining the books and extruding them, so it has some depth.

                Your brick textures need adjusting - fireplace opening is inthe middle of a course; you have vertical mortar joints on the exterior corners; the lower brick structure next to the fireplace (seat?) ends with a mortar joint on the sides, but the top shows brick running horizontally - should see a rowlock course on the ends, and a full face on the length.

                Brick Cap.jpg

                My avatar is an anachronism.

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                  Pixero
                  last edited by 18 Dec 2010, 09:49

                  Just some thoughts that have nothing to do with the images.
                  Why only three possible viewers? Will they never have guests? And why is the projector placed right above the seats? There is always noise from projectors and with a placement like that it will disturb the experience of the movie, right?

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                  • J Offline
                    jo-ke
                    last edited by 18 Dec 2010, 09:59

                    Good thoughts!

                    perhaps they should place the projector with a wide angle near to the wall.

                    http://www.zz7.de

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                    • J Offline
                      jo-ke
                      last edited by 18 Dec 2010, 10:00

                      Thank you Daniel. I didn't pay attention to the bricks. You're absolutely right. My focus was on the placement and style of the furniture.

                      The person without face is my staff πŸ˜„

                      This is the concept of the homecinema of the same project:

                      kr006.jpg
                      kr008.jpg

                      kr007.jpg
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                      http://www.zz7.de

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                        notareal
                        last edited by 18 Dec 2010, 10:51

                        I am not sure about the view angle from home theater seating, I believe recommendation is 36 degrees. Maybe just the used FoV but for me view angle looks smaller. Anyhow, worth to recheck.

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                          Bryan K
                          last edited by 19 Dec 2010, 00:12

                          Bungalow? That's one nice Post Modern bungalow! (or was it Modern? I lose track after Le Corbusier, Van Der Rohe, Bauhaus, Wright, Johnson, Pei, Echler... you get the idea πŸ˜„ )

                          The remodel looks excellent. Good job!

                          See my portfolio at https://delphiscousin.blogspot.com/

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                            jo-ke
                            last edited by 26 Dec 2010, 12:22

                            update to the homecinema- project. Unfortunately, I didn't have any time to let all the renders cook long enough, so they are still grainy. But never the less, the customer is very happy with the result.


                            suk001.jpg


                            suk002.jpg


                            suk003.jpg


                            suk004.jpg

                            http://www.zz7.de

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