Twilight Render Glass Conservatory + External

steelers05

These are very good images and I think progress is really showing.

A few crits though...the foreground plant is too close to the camera. It could certainly work in the scene, but it is not detailed enough to be that close to the camera. I think the bump levels on some of your materials are a bit high and that combined with the noise on some of the images creates a graineness that is a bit distracting. The only other thing is the glass....morely the joints..it seems like there should be some sort of frame. I could be wrong but that system seems like you would need some sort of frame or connector pieces for it to work and I think that would help add to the realism. But you also may have a system that is as your illustrating.?

Anyways, keep up the good work and id like to see a night scene as well.

massimo

This last one has an amazing "airy breath". I like it very much! Only those pillars and roof beams made of glass ( ) worry me a bit.

olishea

thanks steelers. im not going into all the structure im just the monkey. there is a frame can you not see it. the only part of the structure I didn't show is the joints between the structural members, they are not continuous as ive shown it.

the foreground plant should be blurred but not got round to it yet.

new one, bump reduced

olishea

i know i know, but like i say im just the monkey!!

airy breath!! nice! cheers

I updated previous image with DOF blur to foreground foliage....

olishea

left this one to cook a bit longer....

I normally don't like lens flares but I think it works in this image.

higher res version here:http://twilightrender.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=1351&p=11117#p11117

massimo

Perhaps you can put in your glass conservatory this all glass table by Renzo Piano... The legs are pre-stretched with a steel cable in order to resist to the compression. It's called TESO (italian word that means stretched) made by FontanaArte. Added also a PDF.

teso.pdf

olishea

sweet! cheers for your interest massimo...renzo is a legend!

i must admit i love all-glass furniture. how practical it is I don't know!!

single piece glass table, bit common but impressive nonetheless:

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olishea

external, for practice really:

comments appreciated, cheers.

hidden geometry:

sketchup view:

final render:

D-space

Hi Oli, I guess you're cruising when exterior shots are concern. Great renders as always.

massimo

Veeery niiice!!! I can feel the warmth of the sun.

olishea

thanks dspace and massimo!!

I wish I could feel the warmth I'm bloody freezin!!

higher res version and settings here: http://twilightrender.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=1351&start=40

michaliszissiou

@olishea said:

thanks dspace and massimo!!

I wish I could feel the warmth I'm bloody freezin!!

higher res version and settings here: http://twilightrender.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=1351&start=40

I told you before, some more magenta lights can really makes you feel some warmth.

olishea

yeah I did mate, first thing I did pretty much...made huge difference. i think the colour is ok with this one. lol i meant im cold in my office!!

ken28875

Great renders, Oli.

Cheers!

-KN

olishea

cheers ken!

choppir

Nice work Oli

I like the glass on the last image!

choppir

dylan

Oli, what have you used to create the transitions and compile the video?
They seem a little fast to me. It's a good idea though and still looks good.

Keynote is worth a look, has some great transitions.

olishea

its google picasa Dylan.

The transitions are very nice and smooth...then as soon as you put them on youtube! boom! bad quality! might try vimeo instead.....

its just a normal fading transition, nothing fancy. I made them fast because long transitions looked even worse on youtube.

holmes1977

Amazing stuff Oli

Fantastic renders. You really have come along way.

olishea

cheers holmes! nice of you to say that!