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    david57
    last edited by 20 Feb 2010, 03:03

    Looks nice. I like those trees and bushes in the back.

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      Bryan K
      last edited by 21 Feb 2010, 08:42

      Looks really good.

      The people are interesting. Where did you get them? I like the style.

      See my portfolio at https://delphiscousin.blogspot.com/

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        dylan
        last edited by 21 Feb 2010, 11:40

        @unknownuser said:

        The people are interesting. Where did you get them? I like the style.

        They are Formfonts models.
        http://www.formfonts.com/

        Nice work Jason.
        I have used this style myself very successfully for a planning application.

        http://dmdarchitecture.co.uk/

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          ScottPara
          last edited by 21 Feb 2010, 13:54

          Nice to know I am not the only one rushed to get a job out only for it to be shelved or reviewed weeks later. I just make sure to charge a "rushed rate".

          Once again, these are fantastic. The style is almost calming.

          Love the fact that some HATE my avatar.....

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            red_shift
            last edited by 22 Feb 2010, 19:40

            I guess I risk being the only critic here...but here goes! I think the background is emphasized too much and it not only detracts from the building and other elements, but creates an oppressively gray overcast mood, whereas all your active people and shadows suggest to me a bright sunny day. You might try removing the background and inserting something more transparent in post. Also the one plant in the center of each "lawn" seems odd.

            The one difficulty with applying textures (which probably have a color)is that when viewed in grayscale the gray tones may be too similar. I think you've done a really good job keeping these images readable. And the modeling is nicely detailed.

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              marked001
              last edited by 22 Feb 2010, 21:27

              yeah...good call red_shift.. probably should've lowered it all down a bit to get some brighter sky in the background.. this was a quick and easy way to do the background, but not sure i'll use it again or not...

              thanks for the help.

              http://www.revision21vis.com

              instagram: revi21on

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                cheffey
                last edited by 22 Feb 2010, 22:03

                or maybe a darker sky, I think contrast between foreground and background will help.
                quick rehash.


                apologies Jason, great looking images.

                BROSRŌMAN BRÄUN

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                  marked001
                  last edited by 22 Feb 2010, 22:47

                  that looks awesome, steven...love it. that said, my client would hate it! haha..

                  http://www.revision21vis.com

                  instagram: revi21on

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                    JuanV.Soler
                    last edited by 22 Feb 2010, 23:03

                    Hí marked001,
                    i think that the building...going to house a yoga studio...
                    i´ll better leave it without any more stuff.
                    i like it

                    its cold for me but i can get the spirit of the proposal and i think that you are going to have to calm the kids around

                    cheers

                    will like to see the progress

                    .)
                    background like a sunrising between the mountains ?

                    ,))),

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                      red_shift
                      last edited by 2 Mar 2010, 01:29

                      I'm still bothered by the dark background..."there's a storm coming!"

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                        marked001
                        last edited by 2 Mar 2010, 01:36

                        dont worry, i think this background was a one-time experiment 😉 haha.

                        http://www.revision21vis.com

                        instagram: revi21on

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