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A couple of TwilightRender renders...Update 01-26

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  • T Offline
    tomsdesk
    last edited by tomsdesk 4 Jan 2010, 14:59

    4...for C&C, thanks (yeah, I don't like the baby blue shutters either :`)


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    http://www.tomsdesk.moonfruit.com/
    2.5D Trees & Shrubs!

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      johnsenior1973
      last edited by 4 Jan 2010, 15:08

      Not really understanding the wall in front of the house. If it was a house on a city street, yes. But it just looks wrong when the house is in that setting.

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        dspace
        last edited by 4 Jan 2010, 16:22

        I think the render cooked really well, esp with the "heavy" trees. πŸ˜„
        I love the baby blues though, it's a couple of reflection on the roof that bothers me. πŸ˜‰

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          Daniel
          last edited by 4 Jan 2010, 17:39

          They look fantastic, Tom. I think I'd prefer to see more sunlight on the front of the building. The second one is particularly dark.

          My avatar is an anachronism.

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            olishea
            last edited by 4 Jan 2010, 19:32

            please can you angle the sun so that the trees cast lovely shadows onto the house?

            you know you want to πŸ˜„

            oli

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              bytor
              last edited by 5 Jan 2010, 01:30

              Tom,

              These look great! I agree with Olishea - please render one with the front of the house lit up and shadowed from your wonderfull trees. Also, the heavy clump of branches on the big tree in the left foreground - is the mapping off on the branches or is it just the angle?

              Bytor

              Find the Cost of Freedom.....

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                cadmunkey
                last edited by 7 Jan 2010, 11:14

                Great work Tom, I like the first picture best. The tones are fantastic!

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                  dedmin
                  last edited by 7 Jan 2010, 12:07

                  No need to re-render - just a little touch-up in Gimp. If the author don't mind ❓


                  Untitled.jpg

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                    tomsdesk
                    last edited by 10 Jan 2010, 17:03

                    Thanks a bunch, Guys...really encouraging! I took several of your suggestions to heart (sorry it took me so long to get back to you: got some contract work, finally!, so a guaranteed paycheck's gotta come first :`) and hope you like?

                    bytor...yes, the mapping is off and I do intend to fix it. Will now also add some lobes to the trunk bases and rework some of the larger lower and exposed branches so they work as nicely in the near foreground as the leaf pngs do (which surprised and pleases me a bunch :`)


                    tn_!render8b+.jpg


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                    http://www.tomsdesk.moonfruit.com/
                    2.5D Trees & Shrubs!

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                      FoXar
                      last edited by 10 Jan 2010, 17:13

                      These images look very good, good work on the tree's too!

                      I especially like the first one in your last post, it gives me the idea of peaceful world where everything's in harmony with each other!

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                        tomsdesk
                        last edited by 11 Jan 2010, 15:10

                        Thanks, FoXar...that's the idea in the shade.

                        http://www.tomsdesk.moonfruit.com/
                        2.5D Trees & Shrubs!

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                          tomsdesk
                          last edited by 14 Jan 2010, 00:21

                          several sides of the 8's and 9's:


                          tn_!render89a+.jpg


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                          http://www.tomsdesk.moonfruit.com/
                          2.5D Trees & Shrubs!

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                            Daniel
                            last edited by 14 Jan 2010, 14:00

                            They look great, Tom.

                            My avatar is an anachronism.

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                              tomsdesk
                              last edited by 21 Jan 2010, 14:19

                              11, 10, 8, 12, and 9 (finished 13 while this was cooking...gettin' closer :`)


                              tn_!render121110+.jpg

                              http://www.tomsdesk.moonfruit.com/
                              2.5D Trees & Shrubs!

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                                tomsdesk
                                last edited by 26 Jan 2010, 16:13

                                Last of the set...now a little clean up then it's pants down and out on the street:


                                tn_!!render171614.jpg

                                http://www.tomsdesk.moonfruit.com/
                                2.5D Trees & Shrubs!

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                                  steelers05
                                  last edited by 26 Jan 2010, 21:09

                                  I think these are looking great...my only critique would be the quality of the skies, but the vegetation is really coming along

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