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    • zimmerklZ Offline
      zimmerkl
      last edited by

      House render in V-Ray with PS post. I'm looking for some suggestions on making it pop a bit more. I want the architecture to be the focal point so I de-saturated the vegetation open to some other suggestions. Also does anyone have a suggestion as to where I could get come nicer looking aspen trees.

      Thanks!


      Patterson_Vray_Sample_6-16-2013.jpg

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      • DanielD Offline
        Daniel
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        The building itself looks okay, but don't de-saturate the plants or use ghost trees - they do not look natural. Do away with one of the trees in the foreground, as they are covering up too much of the subject. If that is not an option ('cause they are existing?), try rotating your view to the left. That would have the added bonus of hiding some of the driveway paving. Your sky looks washed out.

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        • B Offline
          bob-designer
          last edited by

          Make two renderings, one with the trees, one without. Bob

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          • KrisidiousK Offline
            Krisidious
            last edited by

            a couple of birds? I got nothing for ya... it's beautiful.

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            • allanxA Offline
              allanx
              last edited by

              You can change the angle of the camera those trees are obstructing the appearance of the house and re-scale the texture of the house to make it more realistic... 👍

              allanx

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              • CarlohC Offline
                Carloh
                last edited by

                I would straighten the verticals in your render, then it would be just fine in my opinion...

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                • olisheaO Offline
                  olishea
                  last edited by

                  @carloh said:

                  I would straighten the verticals in your render, then it would be just fine in my opinion...

                  +1

                  Especially if you place it on a drawing sheet with other renders. If the verticals converge it makes the whole sheet look untidy.

                  Check out some architectural photography and you'll find verticals are always vertical using a special lens, even on very tall buildings.

                  oli

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                  • zimmerklZ Offline
                    zimmerkl
                    last edited by

                    Thanks for all the comments. Here are my updated images any other comments are welcome.


                    Gray_Sky_v1_vignette_vertical_6-21-2013.jpg


                    Sunset_v1_vignette_vertical_6-21-2013.jpg

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                    • Bryan KB Offline
                      Bryan K
                      last edited by

                      Wow. Big difference. Very nice. 👍

                      See my portfolio at https://delphiscousin.blogspot.com/

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                      • M Offline
                        mihai3d
                        last edited by

                        hi , nice model anyhow.

                        I would suggest to work on the shadows make them more clear ( cast shadows)
                        and if is architecture presentation I would definitely move the last tree from the center .
                        another thing I don t like the sky is too cloudy tend to attract himself

                        good luck

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                        • M Offline
                          mptak
                          last edited by

                          It takes a village to perfect a render. Love it!

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                          • srxS Offline
                            srx
                            last edited by

                            On your last picture, the tree is in the center, with all attention on it. I would change the angle to make the tree less important than architecture.

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