Harvest time..

hellnbak

@hellnbak said:

From now on you are allowed to post a model only if it sucks.

are you sure you want that? What if his sucky models are still way better than mine or yours

Good point.

Sorry John, you're not allowed to post any more stuff.

Krisidious

Hmmm... Not what I was expecting when I clicked this...

hellnbak

Just to make myself feel a little better, I do have one small criticism -

because of the placement, to me it looks like the corn is growing out of the wagons

tadema

Thanks for the comments everyone.
Steve I thought the same after it was posted, the crop looks as if it's growing from the carts!even more so when it's pointed out.
A little change of background.
John

Carts 2.jpg

hellnbak

Nice change. I like the DOF effect.

andybot

@tadema said:

Thanks for the comments everyone.
Steve I thought the same after it was posted, the crop looks as if it's growing from the carts!even more so when it's pointed out.
A little change of background.
John

John,
I think it may have more to do with the perspective you chose. Maybe if you could see more background between the carts. Right now, the horizon line is completely covered by the two carts. It's hard to tell what's behind or what's on top of the carts.

Andy

tadema

Hello Andy, I've taken the easy way out and lowered the wall
This is what happens when you model off the cuff.
John

Low Wall.jpg

ely862me

Me likey the first with the crops. If you could remove the wall, and let the bare plants near the carts . I haven't actually seen walls near the crops in the fields !

Anyway, as always, wonderful compositions !

tadema

Thanks Elisei, removed the wall as low as I can.
John

Removed wall.jpg

ely862me

I hope you don't mind !

Leaving away the bad retouch, what do you think about it ?

Removed wall a.jpg