Bedroom
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Hi, jo-ke:
Great modeling, excellent scene, and nice wall configuration. I can see the work you put into this. -
thank you for your comments. I try to post more views in the next days...
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Good start, but this render needs much more work to make it 'pop', IMHO. The materials look unrealistic, your models need bevels, the plant in the corner looks like a cardboard cut-out (which could work, but it doesn't here), the curtains need some more attention, as does the white piece of furniture in the foreground (as it looks now, it's not really deserving of the prominent place you've given it). I'd reposition the camera too. And lastly, the lighting looks univiting to me.
Still - this could really work.
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I have to agree with Tom. The materials are holding this image back as is the lighting. The bed looks completely fake as well. The mattress looks like a box with a sheet over it.
Scott
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took your critics and worked on it...
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update of that scene. changed bed and armchairs...
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This is looking really good. But I gotta say, I'm still having a problem with the headboard area. While I can figure it out, it takes awhile, and that is time distracted from the overall image.
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Big improvement; that bed looks much more realistic.
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here's an animation of the reconstruction...
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the animation doesn't seem to work.
so here's a link to the animation:
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