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    • DanielD Offline
      Daniel
      last edited by

      I recall the advise/criticism of a professor once....your client does not want to shell out lots of money to build a building, only to see it sitting there empty (especially retail), so you shouldn't present it that way. Put some life into your images.

      My avatar is an anachronism.

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      • soloS Offline
        solo
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        @stevebo said:

        I think these images have a great deal of potential but currently just look a bit "flat". Unrefined maybe is a better word, but they don't really have a good "punch" to the image. Like it has been said before, it needs some life. Maybe people and maybe turn on the computer screens! Have an image on the monitors.

        I hope you don't mind, but I did a quick Photoshop job of one of the images. Very quick but just gives an idea of what I mean. Adding some life and depth into the image.

        return.jpg

        Attention to details mate...

        All good presentations need to be scrutinised by a trained eye before releasing to the untrained eye.

        return.jpg

        1. texture UV's
        2. Material wrong
        3. Black material or shadow? looks wrong
        4. Light hotspot/burn
        5. Diffuse mat? or forgotten material?
        6. Too shiny, no bump or spec.

        http://www.solos-art.com

        If you see a toilet in your dreams do not use it.

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        • GwyattG Offline
          Gwyatt
          last edited by

          Love the renders, what render pack did you use in the end?

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          • HieruH Offline
            Hieru
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            @brokenstaral said:

            If you don't...you can only call youself architectural designer.

            Not necessarily a dirty word in my experience πŸ˜‰

            www.davidhier.co.uk

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