The sound of my silence (tweaked version)
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Hi everyone, it's been quite long that i haven't visited due to loads of work inside the office. I'm back with a rendering fresh from the oven!!
i've put lotsa love in this work, because it's for "someone special", that i hold so dearly and secretly in the deepest recesses of my heart!! 
I hope you guys like it!! Enjoy!! C&Cs are very much welcome!!
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Yes, I bet it´s for someone special, judging by that ring ( It is a ring, right? )
The Beatles...the first thing that comes to my mind when I think of my special someone is Something.
Nevertheless, I always enjoy your work!
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Dang. Why can't I live in cool places like that?
Well done.
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@numbthumb: bro, thanks for the comment!!
You're right about the Beatles, the song is something, and my "special someone" is a fan of the Beatles, as well. @bryan k: thanks bro!! i, myself, is also dreaming of living in such cool places!! together with whom this render is for!!
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Thank you for sharing. That is an excellent image. Your special someone should be proud. Having a purpose certainly provides the drive to excel.
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@mitcorb: thank you very much!! your comment is just like my special someone, it makes my heart skip a beat!!haha!! thanks once again.
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I came back to say, not only is this well rendered in my opinion, but the choice of camera angle and the composition as well as the mood expressed make this piece.
You can have a technically correct render in all aspects, but without composition, and thought about the final image, you might as well just take a flyby snapshot with a low res phone camera.Oh, I suppose there could be some tweaks somewhere, but I like it as is.
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@modelhead: thanks for the comment bro! the couch work depicts something that says "restless be not, you're the one i only love"!! hehe!!
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Here's another version of this rendering i wasn't satisfied with the first post. I tweaked the couch and the background thing, i feel it's quite incomplete and too bright for the mood. So here it is, you guys might wanna compare it with the previous one. Thanks. Enjoy, C&Cs are very much welcome.
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Hi, delineator:
Your new version is nice also, with more definition of the foreground texture. However, a key element-the ring- is more subdued. This is just my opinion, but I feel the first image is more effective.
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