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      ScottPara
      last edited by

      This is part of a larger office redesign.

      While the render is far from where I want it to be (still to bright) it is getting closer. I am changing out the books as the look terrible. A handful of other tweaks are in the works as well. Just looking for some comments in case I am missing something.

      Modeled in Sketchup and rendered in Vray.

      Scot


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        fymoro
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        Hi Scott,

        Nice rendering, a bit to bright as you say but I think that you can down the GI (Skylight.

        For me The left of the office is very empty, why you do not try to add two modern armchair small table and some magazine.

        And also perhaps one blind to the wimdow.

        Bye Scott

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          ScottPara
          last edited by

          Thanks Fymoro,

          Yes I am re-rendering now with a lower GI, hopefully that should take care of the burn. There is an arm chair behind the camera that will be seen in the next render (different angle) but I agree it is a bit empty. I added the plant to try to fill it and give a nice set of shadows but I do not think it is enough just yet. I am open to suggestions but I need to also keep a clean design (requirement).

          There are blinds on the window but I think with the screaming GI they are just being burned out. Hopefully like I say with a lower GI things will start to come into view better.

          Thanks for the comments.

          Scott

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            fymoro
            last edited by

            Ok Scott,

            I wait for the second rendering.

            I am a Vray user too, 👍

            About the left side, may be you can approach a bit the plant.

            Bye

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            • DanielD Offline
              Daniel
              last edited by

              Other than the items you already mentioned, I think it looks great. Looking forward to seeing the next iteration.

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                DzineTech
                last edited by

                Personally I wouldn't ever change the GI from 1.0 in order to maintain physical correctness and control the exposure through the physical camera and colour mapping settings.

                Give Reinhard with a burn value of 0.6-0.8 a try and see if that solves your problems.

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                  mirjman
                  last edited by

                  for the render, i think it has a great feel. One strange thing about the model though is that the middle set of shelves do not line up with the side bookshelf vertically and makes the bookshelf look out of place... wondering if that was intentional. the fluorescent lights also seem a little bright in comparison to the strength of the sun. great work though

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                    boofredlay
                    last edited by

                    Great work as usual Scott. I look forward to the next one.

                    You said it has to be clean but it sure would be nice to see those shelves holding much more than you presently have. And maybe a climbing ivy on the top of the shelves. Just a thought.

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                      ScottPara
                      last edited by

                      Eric,

                      While I would always love to really dress the office I am limited since the furniture has to take center stage (as that is our business). I have added binders since the books look bad and I am rendering now (still a long way from done). Also materials have been tweaked and seem to be much better now.

                      I truly wish Vray was for a MAC (did I say loud enough 😄 ) Having to run it through a VM session sucks! Yes, I know there are others but this is what I have to deal with now. Modo will take the place of Vray here shortly.

                      Scott

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                        Crazy Eyes
                        last edited by

                        I'm not sure about the excessive lighting 'cause Im new to V-Ray, but the lights on the ceiling don't look right to be, being too bright and all, but that may change when you address the excess light.

                        As for the bare wall, you could put a white radiator/heater on the wall, it wouldn't then take your view away from the desks, while filling the gap??

                        Looks good though 👍

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                          marked001
                          last edited by

                          I like the wide angle of the view 👍

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                            Stinkie
                            last edited by

                            @marked001 said:

                            I like the wide angle of the view 👍

                            I don't. That's a real eye sore to me right there. Other than that, this is a promising start.

                            Scott, are you seriously thinking of using modo instead of Vray to render your SU models with? I'd suggest you take a long, hard look at the interior renders over at modo HQ. Clearly, Vray produces better output. Probably faster, too.

                            BootCamp is your friend. 😄

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                              ScottPara
                              last edited by

                              Thanks guys. The wide angle is something I kind of like. I guess it is just a matter of taste.

                              A wall radiator would never fly as this is a new building and would never ave anything like that. Good suggestion, just not for this project.

                              Stinkie,

                              Yes, I will be moving over to Modo for rendering and a portion of my modeling as well. I think that Modo is more than capable of doing a good interior render much the same as Vray. Wait for 401 (volumetric lighting)....Vray won't keep up then. Speed I have found between the two is pretty close. Really depends on the project ans settings. I like Modo, and the way it handles materials makes this a great program for anyone to have in their toolbox. I take it you have been working with Modo?

                              Scott

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                              • StinkieS Offline
                                Stinkie
                                last edited by

                                Yes, I have a license. Great modeling toolset! The renderer isn't bad, far from it, just not as good as Vray. A lot fiddlier, too, in my opinion. Luxology's got a really interesting product, though. I'm quite curious to see what 401'll bring. It better be 64 bit. 😄

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