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    • EdsonE Offline
      Edson
      last edited by

      it is an administrative building with some facilities for conventions. as soon as the results come out i shall post more and explain a couple of solutions i used.

      edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
      http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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      • soloS Offline
        solo
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        Looking awesome, did you use the new Podium for Mac?

        http://www.solos-art.com

        If you see a toilet in your dreams do not use it.

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        • K Offline
          kwistenbiebel
          last edited by

          Hi Edson,

          Wow , I like this image a lot.
          The composition of all these orthogonal elements is strong, and even though the building has a Spartan appearance, the athmosphere created is quite playfull.

          There is one thing that could improve the image: getting rid of the repetitivity (is that the correct word?) of the brick texture on the left.

          Keep those fine images coming.

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          • R Offline
            remus
            last edited by

            Are the trees meant to be pointing through the canopy? or is it just my imagination that they are?

            Interesting design by the way. any more pics you can show us?

            http://remusrendering.wordpress.com/

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            • EdsonE Offline
              Edson
              last edited by

              @solo,
              yes, indeed. luckily for me the beta tests started just as i was about to render these. i was able to render these on mac at 1/2 the time that i was getting on win xp under parallels.

              @biebel,
              i did not want to touch those walls as they are from an ugly existing building but you have a point there. perhaps blurring them would work too.

              @remus,
              the canopy only touches the building at the point of entrance. those trees are in between the two.

              p.s: i posted a couple more picts at the podium forum.

              edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
              http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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              • Mike LuceyM Offline
                Mike Lucey
                last edited by

                Clean, very clean indeed with nothing forced about the design,
                I like it.

                Looking forward to seeing more details and info.

                Mike

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                • FrederikF Offline
                  Frederik
                  last edited by

                  Looking really good, Edson..!! πŸ‘
                  Only small crit will be the red tile material you've used on the left wall... Looks a bit CG to me... 😐

                  Great to hear that the Podium Mac version is working like a charm..!! πŸ˜„

                  Cheers
                  Kim Frederik

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                  • EdsonE Offline
                    Edson
                    last edited by

                    @frederik said:

                    Only small crit will be the red tile material you've used on the left wall... Looks a bit CG to me... 😐
                    Great to hear that the Podium Mac version is working like a charm..!! πŸ˜„

                    i agree with you, kim. i did not pay much attention to the existing building in the renders, as it is so bad. but since everyone is pointing out the inadequacy of those textures i'd better fix them.

                    yes, i am quite happy with podium. i am getting satisfactory results with it with very little tweaking. take care.

                    edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
                    http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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                    • tinanneT Offline
                      tinanne
                      last edited by

                      Beautiful job Edson. I like it very much πŸ˜„

                      Executive Director : American Society of Architectural Illustrators
                      AIP 30 Competition opens soon. ASAI.org

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                      • EdsonE Offline
                        Edson
                        last edited by

                        thanks, tina. i shall post more when the results come out.

                        edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
                        http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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                        • Chris FullmerC Offline
                          Chris Fullmer
                          last edited by

                          Those louvres look like you're getting in touch with your inner Richard Neutra.

                          Chris

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                          • marked001M Offline
                            marked001
                            last edited by

                            cant wait to see the rest of the images...love the geometry of the louvers and the composition of the image.. (yes, definiltey work on the texturing of that exist'g building... )

                            http://www.revision21vis.com

                            instagram: revi21on

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                            • EdsonE Offline
                              Edson
                              last edited by

                              chris and jason,

                              you soon will see that those louvers are at the same time sun breakers AND part of the structural system. instead of having columns every Xm i have many thin elements made of steel: the whole outer limit is load bearing. the idea was to create a sort of steel baloon frame. to be continued...

                              edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
                              http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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                              • marked001M Offline
                                marked001
                                last edited by

                                gotcha.. kind of like the world trade center exterior columns? very cool....columns suck!

                                http://www.revision21vis.com

                                instagram: revi21on

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                                • EdsonE Offline
                                  Edson
                                  last edited by

                                  @marked001 said:

                                  gotcha.. kind of like the world trade center exterior columns? very cool....columns suck!

                                  sort of, but hopefully not the same fate...

                                  edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
                                  http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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                                  • marked001M Offline
                                    marked001
                                    last edited by

                                    well that's a given... i coudlnt think of any other 'known' buildings that used exterior columns besides one here in philly....so i had to use it.. haha.

                                    http://www.revision21vis.com

                                    instagram: revi21on

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                                    • DanielD Offline
                                      Daniel
                                      last edited by

                                      An elegant design and beautiful image; good luck on the competition.
                                      My only crit would be to add some people.
                                      When I click on the image and see it at a larger size, the tiling of the pink brick(?) material on the left is not as obvious to me.

                                      My avatar is an anachronism.

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                                      • EdsonE Offline
                                        Edson
                                        last edited by

                                        well, now that the competition has ended (and i did not get anything) i can post some other picts here. more to come soon.


                                        aerea_corr.jpg


                                        dacalcada_final.jpg


                                        foyer.jpg

                                        edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
                                        http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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                                        • T Offline
                                          tomsdesk
                                          last edited by

                                          Edson, you design such comfortable large spaces: my hat's off!

                                          http://www.tomsdesk.moonfruit.com/
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                                            tomsdesk
                                            last edited by

                                            Bump...'cause it appears Friday's stuff isn't showing up in "New Posts".

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                                            2.5D Trees & Shrubs!

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