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    Edson
    last edited by 8 Aug 2008, 21:34

    an image from a competition i just handed in. the results are not out yet but i could not resist posting it here. rendered in podium.


    acesso_corr.jpg

    edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
    http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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      tomsdesk
      last edited by 8 Aug 2008, 21:44

      Very sweet lines, Edson...nice render too! What's the building type?

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        Edson
        last edited by 8 Aug 2008, 21:48

        it is an administrative building with some facilities for conventions. as soon as the results come out i shall post more and explain a couple of solutions i used.

        edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
        http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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          solo
          last edited by 8 Aug 2008, 21:50

          Looking awesome, did you use the new Podium for Mac?

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            kwistenbiebel
            last edited by 8 Aug 2008, 22:20

            Hi Edson,

            Wow , I like this image a lot.
            The composition of all these orthogonal elements is strong, and even though the building has a Spartan appearance, the athmosphere created is quite playfull.

            There is one thing that could improve the image: getting rid of the repetitivity (is that the correct word?) of the brick texture on the left.

            Keep those fine images coming.

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              remus
              last edited by 8 Aug 2008, 22:22

              Are the trees meant to be pointing through the canopy? or is it just my imagination that they are?

              Interesting design by the way. any more pics you can show us?

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                Edson
                last edited by 8 Aug 2008, 23:12

                @solo,
                yes, indeed. luckily for me the beta tests started just as i was about to render these. i was able to render these on mac at 1/2 the time that i was getting on win xp under parallels.

                @biebel,
                i did not want to touch those walls as they are from an ugly existing building but you have a point there. perhaps blurring them would work too.

                @remus,
                the canopy only touches the building at the point of entrance. those trees are in between the two.

                p.s: i posted a couple more picts at the podium forum.

                edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
                http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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                  Mike Lucey
                  last edited by 9 Aug 2008, 00:46

                  Clean, very clean indeed with nothing forced about the design,
                  I like it.

                  Looking forward to seeing more details and info.

                  Mike

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                    Frederik
                    last edited by 9 Aug 2008, 06:40

                    Looking really good, Edson..!! πŸ‘
                    Only small crit will be the red tile material you've used on the left wall... Looks a bit CG to me... 😐

                    Great to hear that the Podium Mac version is working like a charm..!! πŸ˜„

                    Cheers
                    Kim Frederik

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                      Edson
                      last edited by 10 Aug 2008, 11:57

                      @frederik said:

                      Only small crit will be the red tile material you've used on the left wall... Looks a bit CG to me... 😐
                      Great to hear that the Podium Mac version is working like a charm..!! πŸ˜„

                      i agree with you, kim. i did not pay much attention to the existing building in the renders, as it is so bad. but since everyone is pointing out the inadequacy of those textures i'd better fix them.

                      yes, i am quite happy with podium. i am getting satisfactory results with it with very little tweaking. take care.

                      edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
                      http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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                        tinanne
                        last edited by 10 Aug 2008, 15:02

                        Beautiful job Edson. I like it very much πŸ˜„

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                          Edson
                          last edited by 10 Aug 2008, 21:40

                          thanks, tina. i shall post more when the results come out.

                          edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
                          http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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                            Chris Fullmer
                            last edited by 10 Aug 2008, 23:25

                            Those louvres look like you're getting in touch with your inner Richard Neutra.

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                              marked001
                              last edited by 11 Aug 2008, 13:10

                              cant wait to see the rest of the images...love the geometry of the louvers and the composition of the image.. (yes, definiltey work on the texturing of that exist'g building... )

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                                Edson
                                last edited by 11 Aug 2008, 13:18

                                chris and jason,

                                you soon will see that those louvers are at the same time sun breakers AND part of the structural system. instead of having columns every Xm i have many thin elements made of steel: the whole outer limit is load bearing. the idea was to create a sort of steel baloon frame. to be continued...

                                edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
                                http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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                                  marked001
                                  last edited by 11 Aug 2008, 13:49

                                  gotcha.. kind of like the world trade center exterior columns? very cool....columns suck!

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                                  instagram: revi21on

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                                    Edson
                                    last edited by 11 Aug 2008, 14:19

                                    @marked001 said:

                                    gotcha.. kind of like the world trade center exterior columns? very cool....columns suck!

                                    sort of, but hopefully not the same fate...

                                    edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
                                    http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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                                      marked001
                                      last edited by 11 Aug 2008, 14:31

                                      well that's a given... i coudlnt think of any other 'known' buildings that used exterior columns besides one here in philly....so i had to use it.. haha.

                                      http://www.revision21vis.com

                                      instagram: revi21on

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                                        Daniel
                                        last edited by 11 Aug 2008, 21:00

                                        An elegant design and beautiful image; good luck on the competition.
                                        My only crit would be to add some people.
                                        When I click on the image and see it at a larger size, the tiling of the pink brick(?) material on the left is not as obvious to me.

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                                          Edson
                                          last edited by 15 Aug 2008, 17:29

                                          well, now that the competition has ended (and i did not get anything) i can post some other picts here. more to come soon.


                                          aerea_corr.jpg


                                          dacalcada_final.jpg


                                          foyer.jpg

                                          edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre β€’ brasil
                                          http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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