Revisiting npr

lrsuser

Revisiting the dw/mixed media/npr look.
There are things in it I absolutely like and things that I absolutely don't like. Can you tell which ones?!!..
...and what do you think? How can I improve this?

SU+FormFonts' stuff+GM's glass texture + SU styles & Layered (messed around) in Photoshop

Thanks!

PS. Didn't know where this belongs so moderators please feel free to move this thread to appropriate gallery

Ross Macintosh

I very much enjoyed seeing that! So many great aspects that inspire.

If you were inclined to work on it a bit more I'd suggest faking some reflections in the glazed walls above the entry. A few relections would raise it to the next level. Its already very high.

Regards, Ross

lrsuser

Thanks for the kind words Ross! Much appreciate your comments.

Nick W

I feel like the sky, lighting, overall tone is a little drab. Nothing wrong with that in and of itself, I just like a happy sky

Very nice work.

my two cents

Daniel

Overall it's a beautiful image. There are two items that jumped out at me: 1) The green sky appears unnatural; and 2) the multi-colored vegetation is a bit too much and is competing with the building (assuming the purpose of the rendering is to present the building design).

lrsuser

I appreciate everybody's comments...
and thanks for the critique Daniel! I will keep these in mind when I do a next one.

jenujacob

might i add that usually watercolor illustrators do 2 point perspectivess of their renders... it was easier to do it than the 3 point one. the next time try it out with the 2 point perspective! should look cool!
cheers!

lrsuser

good point jj

dylan

Im loving it.

I would personally change the perspective, it somehow does not look quite right and I would try losing the two pink blossoming cherry trees.

Dave R

@nick w said:

I feel like the sky, lighting, overall tone is a little drab. Nothing wrong with that in and of itself, I just like a happy sky

Very nice work.

my two cents

And some "happy trees".

Nice work Irsuser.