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    • Rich O BrienR Online
      Rich O Brien Moderator
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      My eye is drawn to the table. I don't even notice the background.

      The textures used on the table are also very poor and don't resemble wood.

      The entourage have no shadows and the lady on the right is not 100% opaque.

      I wouldn't ay it is an awful render but I really have no idea what I am meant to see here? ๐Ÿ˜•

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        ARsketch
        last edited by

        Thanks. Lets just say its a work in progress at the moment. I ll soften the materials down and add more detail to the model.

        I need to do another series of angles as well so you know what your looking at.

        Do you agree?

        My site for more sketchup models/architectural services. http://www.ardzine.com

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        • Rich O BrienR Online
          Rich O Brien Moderator
          last edited by

          It's a great start. Keep them coming

          Is it a real world project?

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          • pilouP Offline
            pilou
            last edited by

            if it's for architecture, why a such dramatic view of a table ? ๐Ÿ˜‰

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              ARsketch
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              Thanks I know it needs some work, just difficult getting all areas to a good standard.

              The design is a concept at the moment but im trying to get it considered for a healthcare building in Hull. I work as architectural designer for Hull Royal Infirmary. Looking at a lot of improvements in the area.

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              Thanks for your advice.

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              • tademaT Offline
                tadema
                last edited by

                Hello Adam, as Rich stated you need better textures, but the main problem IMHO is the scale of the table and chairs, they are far too big. You will achieve better results with the people if you place them into your scene rather than in PP (shadows).
                Nice light and colours ๐Ÿ‘ .

                John

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                • FrederikF Offline
                  Frederik
                  last edited by

                  Not sure if the tables and chairs are too big...
                  To me it looks more like the entourage people are far too small, leaving the viewer with the impression that it's the table and chairs that are off scale... ๐Ÿ˜•

                  Cheers
                  Kim Frederik

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                    ARsketch
                    last edited by

                    Thanks for your responses. I m going to delete the tables and replace them with something more appropriate, but it will be to scale. I ll try get something underway soon and will repost the new graphics. I really appreciate your guidance on this. Thanks a lot.

                    My site for more sketchup models/architectural services. http://www.ardzine.com

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                    • DanielD Offline
                      Daniel
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                      Regarding the wood texture on the table and chairs, I don't know if it is just a poor texture or if it is just scaled too large. And, if you're going to have a wooden element close enough to see the grain, you need to pay attention to the direction of the grain. In that image it is running all over the place, where it should be horizontal it is vertical.

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                        ARsketch
                        last edited by

                        Here's a new render. Tried to make changes as per your suggestions, what do you think?

                        Thanks in advance for any feedback.


                        CENTRE 2014-03-13 18423300000.jpg

                        My site for more sketchup models/architectural services. http://www.ardzine.com

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                        • tademaT Offline
                          tadema
                          last edited by

                          Hello Adam, the render is much better IMHO but "Czech hedgehogs" ๐Ÿ˜ฎ they also seem to be semi transparent.
                          John

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                            ARsketch
                            last edited by

                            Another one to show some perspective.


                            CONCEPT CENTRE A Aerial smaller size.jpg

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