Small Jazz Club
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..few quick images of a small basement jazz club. SketchUp/Thea/Pshop
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Good images, but the people are a problem imho. I think the blurred transparent person is best. It's a tricky thing at that range & detail.
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Great shots... love the lighting and composition choices. The woman in that last shot looks either tipsy and/or incredibly bored with her date
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yes, people are always my big downfall... I definitely don't spend enough time blending them in (or just don't have the skill!). I haven't looked at these since I completed them and looking at them now the people really really stick out.
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Nice renderings, Jason. Design-wise, I think those lights on the bench backs are problematic - people will brush up against them, or lean back on to them.
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Lovely interior, and FWIW, your people aren't that far off the mark... compared to some of the awful stuff we see in some achitectural renderings
I thought you might find this link interesting and helpful (i know i did)
http://vyonyx.com/tutorial11-blur-matters/
A.
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@andyc said:
FWIW, your people aren't that far off the mark...
Yeah I hope my comment wasn't taken as a crit... I just liked the expression on the face of the woman you chose. I think the people look almost NPR stylized-ish and I dig it a lot. -
Jaz club or lonely hearts club?? Is that girl in the last image dreaming of me? I know most of them do!
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I think she just might be, Richard.
Andy..thanks for that link, that's great. Thanks for the critiques, guys.. I'll keep trying with the people.
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Good job!
Woman in last picture looks like Robb's mother
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