Small Jazz Club

[marked001]

..few quick images of a small basement jazz club. SketchUp/Thea/Pshop

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[chedda]

Good images, but the people are a problem imho. I think the blurred transparent person is best. It's a tricky thing at that range & detail.

[wtrouser]

Great shots... love the lighting and composition choices. The woman in that last shot looks either tipsy and/or incredibly bored with her date

[marked001]

yes, people are always my big downfall... I definitely don't spend enough time blending them in (or just don't have the skill!). I haven't looked at these since I completed them and looking at them now the people really really stick out.

[Daniel]

Nice renderings, Jason. Design-wise, I think those lights on the bench backs are problematic - people will brush up against them, or lean back on to them.

[andyc]

Lovely interior, and FWIW, your people aren't that far off the mark... compared to some of the awful stuff we see in some achitectural renderings

I thought you might find this link interesting and helpful (i know i did)

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[wtrouser]

@andyc said:

FWIW, your people aren't that far off the mark...

Yeah I hope my comment wasn't taken as a crit... I just liked the expression on the face of the woman you chose. I think the people look almost NPR stylized-ish and I dig it a lot.

[Richard]

Jaz club or lonely hearts club?? Is that girl in the last image dreaming of me? I know most of them do!

[marked001]

I think she just might be, Richard.

Andy..thanks for that link, that's great. Thanks for the critiques, guys.. I'll keep trying with the people.

[nickenzyme]

Good job!
Woman in last picture looks like Robb's mother